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That last part, where he forgave himself TT So heart wrenching!

Thank you for clarifying, I was about to go back and re-read the story to see if there was supposed to be some other clues as to what was going on with the last chapter, and now I only have to go back and re-read because I want to. Looking forward to your next story.

'sigh' That was so great ! And very sad too. You made me cry ! T.T But I like the ending even if it's a little abrupt... :) Thank you again for this great piece. Can't wait for the new one !!

Wow—I think I've been hooked since reading the summary. Seriously. Wow. Ever since discovering this story two days ago, I devoured it. Lots of late night reading when I should have been sleeping happened and I have no regrets. Honestly, I was not prepared for the amount of angst that happened, wasn't even expecting it to be honest. I can't wait for the last chapter and for the revision. The plot was dramatic, gripping, and despite being gory it was amazing even though it's just the "rough sketch" as you said. The character development (or regression) for Josh was sometimes similar to the symptoms of Stockholm Syndrome to me, but I enjoyed his character. Poor Joshi :/ Bad things just keep happening to him...I guess that's the price for being invaluable. Sahar is an asshole. I hope he can find it in him to love Josh in his own sick way and stop hurting the poor guy. Anyway, update soon please! I'll be here cheering for you :)

Happy everything to you Lavi.. too bad I am not allowed to rate your story with more then five stars.. at least now you have the winter snowy stars going for you...

I absolutely love this story I can't believe it's already ending I hope I really hope there's going to be a sequel

Sahar is never there when Josh need him !! And now, he's taken by another psycho...
I guess his futur isn't going to be flowers and ballons ! ;)
Thanks for the new chapter...

Thank you for giving us this great work. It feels like it's been a long time since I read good fanfic/slash like this.
Josh is really an interesting protagonist. Sometimes It's hard for me to deal with him because he's so thickheaded and sassy but still I love him. How should I say this...he doesn't feel 'fake' to me. He has a Lot of issues but he had a tough Life so it's understandable. Especially I really admire him for the fact that he never gave up. I really felt those hardships with him.
Man and Sahar... he's getting hate after the last two chapters isn't he xD'' Well it's kind of understandable. Again it showed that we know nearly nothing about what Sahar does or who he is. I'm sure he had a hard life too or else he wouldn't be so fucked up. Of course I still don't think he's a complete bad person (even though he's a scary gangster). I just wish we would get to know more about his thoughts and that he would be just a bit more open to Josh so maybe things would have gone less complicated(?) Anyway..It would be great if he could show his soft side just to Josh and open up his feelings for him or something like that xD Thank you very much for taking your time to write this story.

Hi, Well I to say this and get it out of my system :P
Chapter 27 made me hate Sahar. All those beatings and abusing from previous chapters couldn't be compared to what he did to Josh in chapter 27. It was horrible! So bad that I was thinking I don't want to read any more of it! :( When you updated today, I was hesitant! I was reading ever slowly ... just to see if Sahar appears again? and thank god he didn't! Honestly I don't want to see anymore of him ever! I really can't digest what he did to Josh on chapter 27!!! I was thinking about everything that have happened during these 2 past weeks but ruined Sahar's character completely for me and I couldn't decide which way story was going or what was the hell happened to that Sahar that was nice time to time and showed consideration?! Everyone is reading and following their story for more than a year now and they are part of our lives now ... All I want to say is that I didn't expect something like that and I was shocked and asking myself again and again WHY? Was it your intention to do this from the beginning? Well, you are the author of the story but I just can't wrap my mind about Sahar! If he would have appear in chapter 28 again and with the same attitude, I would have dropped reading the rest of story! I simply can't stand someone like that! To do such a thing, to someone who liked him ...

Anyway, is there going to be something happening between Josh and the Persian guy? Hopefully he is not a psycho like Sahar! :D

Thanks for updating and please kill Sahar for me! :P (I can't believe that I was in love with this guy! :P Maybe that's why I am so disturb with everything that happened in chapter 27!!! It was utterly disturbing and I someone who doesn't get disturb with blood, violence, rape, ... but that chapter really did get into me for some reason ...)

Thanks again ... ^^

I really love this story. It is a real emotional roller coaster. Wish you'd update more often I really get stuck on these chapters and desperately want to know what will happen next