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for Under Blue Skies

by Lavi1443

person Nico Oxenstiernia
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This Fic is incredible! I sneaked a peak at your Tumblr and thus Fanart, and your interpretation of Josh was amazing. And let me just say that your art skills rival that of your writing! Please update, and sketch more of Under Blue Skies' characters!
person myrt
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The story is really well thought. Sometimes some spelling mistakes make an appearance but they didn't prevent me from enjoying the story. There's a lot of arfully constructed suspense. I really really enjoyed reading the story and can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
person Lola
schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't like Sahar , I hope Josh will not work with gangsters, it is very clear that they try with the beaten that Josh will fear and obey. that is awful.
person miles
schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Are Sahar and Amir together ? Hum... They seem to have the same taste for dominance, so maybe not...
Also I think Sahar's trying to 'train and break' poor Josh ! ^^'
Thanks for the fast update ! I like Josh's picture. :)
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always. Can't wait to know what happens next.
schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! And I smell a threesome coming up soon! I cannot wait to read more!!!! I love all the characters and where this story is going so far
person Castiel
schedule February 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank u for update. GOD Sahar is scary :/
person miles
schedule February 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the fast update ! :)
I'm very surprise by Amir's attitude. He's very 'free' with his 'affection'. lol !
I don't know why but I thought it was Sahar who wanted the boy. We'll see...
Until next chapter.
person shahi
schedule February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story is going so far.Josh is an excellent main character I luv him :)
person Denzil
schedule February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Best valentine's day gift ever! I love this so much, thank you!!!