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There's no way I believe Sahar just let him go back to work. I kind of can't believe Josh thinks he's just going back to work...

Side comment, posting a chapter that is just an author's note, is kind of frowned upon. I'll admit I was a little disappointed when I expected another chapter just to find a note, you can add that sort of comment at the beginning / end of your next chapter. If you ever find that you have run out of room for tags in the description, just at the start of the chapter say 'new tags' and list them.

Anyway, I really enjoy this story, keep it up!

Great chapter !
Poor Josh can't take a break ! But I love it ! :p
I went to your tumbr page and the video is amazing !! You're a great artist.
Until next chapter...

Your story is very entertaining.. I don't know how the army service is in Israel Lavi, but I hope you survive to finish the story.. .. best of everything.. :)

A really really good new chapter.love it.right now this story is the best on AFF. Dont make us wait too long and please give us more. Keep up the good work.

This is my favorite story on this site.

Lovingggggg it so far. I love how Josh is still speaking his mind even when he knows he's going to get hit for it. I love his character in general. How he low key cares for his brother and mother even when hesats he doesn't. Actions does speaks louder than words.

Amir , kind of like how his and Josh friendship is turning out to be, it can maybe come in handy in later chapters rouse agains Sahar get him jealous.

Speaking of jealousy , this will be a Sahar x Joshy right? I can totally picture it. Josh is the one who even if he still can't look Sahar straight in the eyes , can still stand there and disrespect him like no other. I think Sahar low key likes that about him.

Not really feeling Ben, seems too clingy, don't think Josh likes the clingy type.

Anywho , I enjoy the lenghts of your chapter, always feel like I read enough to satisfy me even when I get sad the chapter is over *insert sad face*

Keep up the good work

XOXO

If this is more then a MxM and it turns to be a threesome , can I get a warning please. I'm not a big fan of threesomes. Other then that , great story.

Goooood.plot development is a little slow but lovely and fun.look how a bout show us more of Jush stuborn reaction and tongue toward Sahar? Love his responds.ha ha ha

Thank you for the new chapter ! :)
Well, that was unexpected, Liah doing this. After all the beating... Poor boy. Sahar really is a brute.
I guess Josh will receive a visit soon... Can't wait for more ^^

Just a collector ? Somehow I doubt it ! :)
Liah saved Josh ass ! Litteraly !
Thanks for the regular updates...