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for Under Blue Skies

by Lavi1443

person Roya7
schedule April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The last part was just hilarious!!! lol My stomach hurts! OMG! Thanks,

But damn! I can't believe Sahar doing this to poor Josh!!! He is hurt and scared and I hope he is not claustrophobic !!!

I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon ^_^
person Ssh
schedule April 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, Im very curious who is Jose gonna have relationship with?? Amir or Shar?? because you decided no 3some in this story..
At first I tough Ben is gonna be secnd character, but then he is not, he is just a flink.. Cant wait to let people know that Josh has 2 dangerous man after his ass...
person Shahi
schedule March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more!
person Tima
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Are u a guy? I never read a good m/m fiction by a guy. If youre a guy then youre my first favorite guy m/m writer! :)
person Tahn
schedule March 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun. It seems he can't do anything besides get into trouble or get into more trouble.
person BriBri
schedule March 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Josh he can't seem to catch a break.
person Roya7
schedule March 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh my God!!! The worst cliffhanger I have ever seen!!!!! How can I wait for the next chapter???? O.O
lol, that was great! The more J tries to get away, the more involve he becomes! :P I like him very much! ^_^
Oh BTW, your choices for the names was very interesting for me. Both Amir and Sahar are Persian names, though there is one important fact that Sahar is very common female name! :D It means dawn and Amir means prince or even king sometimes. :) Thought it might be interesting for you to know that ;)

Anyways, please please pleaseeee update soon! (puppy eyes begging ...) ^_^
person miles
schedule March 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
lol !! That was a mean cliff ! Please update soon...
person bambi4real
schedule March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Josh just cant get a break.
person Roya7
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I just find this fiction and all night I was awake reading all 9 chapters, back to back! Great work! I can't wait to read more! ^_^ Please update soon and thanks for sharing :)

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