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April 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your story is the only reason that im still here.thank you for fast updates and no youre wrong poor Josh isnt crazy at all. Sahar is!
BTW Did you know that Sahar is an Iranian girl name?:)
BTW Did you know that Sahar is an Iranian girl name?:)
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April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
He's gonna regret running like that, I doubt he makes it far.
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April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You made my day !! Thanks for the new update !
Each time I said 'poor boy' but this chapter is very hard for him...^^'
I don't think he's going to run so far. Lol !
Each time I said 'poor boy' but this chapter is very hard for him...^^'
I don't think he's going to run so far. Lol !
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April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, just near the end you used Sahar's name but I think you mean Amir...
'When Sahar turned.......'
'When Sahar turned.......'
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April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad ch but not as goog as previous one. im not a pro in writing stories so maybe im not 100% right in this however i feel these cycles of beating Josh and then treating him alittle better and again beating josh and ... Theyr getting alittle repeatativ and kinda bothering. It gives me this feeling that after 12 ch we r still at the beggining.r we?
Anyway i love ur story and hope its getting better and better.
Anyway i love ur story and hope its getting better and better.
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April 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hate sahar so much omg. Poor josh keeps getting the shit kicked out of him :(
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April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi dear.another good ch and i should say u save it ontime because after previous one i was afraid it was getting a little frustrating.good job.but here i have another problem.how am i suppose to come to like sahar if he sent poor jash in the trunk? And after all that horrible things that he went through.oh my good.in the trunk?really? He is hurting man.come on.should i side with kafir or amir instead of sahar?
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April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"Please someone tell him it was not true."
Sorry dude, it's true.
Haha.
Awesome chapter! I enjoyed reading it. I wonder what that whole shootout was about? Can't wait to see what happens next!
Sorry dude, it's true.
Haha.
Awesome chapter! I enjoyed reading it. I wonder what that whole shootout was about? Can't wait to see what happens next!
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April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank u for update.great story
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April 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohh ! I missed you last week ! Thank you for this new chapter ! :)
Josh is going to become Sahar's scapegoat like this... He's nothing but black and blue...
True, he has a big mouth and know how to push others :P
Josh is going to become Sahar's scapegoat like this... He's nothing but black and blue...
True, he has a big mouth and know how to push others :P