rate_review Reviews

I am soo curious how this story will develop. The last chapter was excruciating and I so want to know what happens next. 

Uh oh. Sounds like meeting the Alpha will not be pleasant. I'm wondering if Mr. Handsome is his mate with the way he keeps touching him, and seems upset with the idea of the Alpha meeting him.

Wow, Alpha is a dick.

Any time :) I think you are doing just fine. This story just gets more and more interesting as it goes along.

Oh, I think Ev is in some serious shit and wonder what the Alpha is like. I hope Mister handsome turns out to be his mate though. I bet Fred and his family are worried sick about what happened to him.

Noes! Cliffhanger! Also, small thing, I think you mean sigh instead of sight. Can't wait for more.

Looking forward to next chapter :)

Ooo, I wonder what's going on. I hope the dad gets what's coming to him.

This seems interesting. It makes me wonder what's going on. Please keep writing.

Hello! I just discovered this gem of a story you have shared and am very surprised at the lack of reviews because it's really good. So, is Ev a wolf shifter or something else? He must have some kind of memory that he's not human or fully human because he thought this; It was different with humans, if you asked them the same question twice they sometimes tended to say something entirely different. I will be patient and wait for things to unfold as story goes along. I really am getting a kick out of Fred and like him very much and if his father is beating his son up then I hope justice is served.

I for sure will be keeping an eye out for updates on this. I did notice a few typos but nothing too bad and spell check or a read-over might help you catch them. For example; in chapter one you typed thought instead of though, ly instead of lie down, but all in all nothing that would deter me from reading this.

Good job and look forward to reading the rest of this.