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April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love how real zhas is. All of the characters are so fleshed out and human that i can't help but be fond of them as well but zhas reminds me of people of i know and he experiences things in such a realistic manner that i find myself favoring him (good thing he's the main character) i hope you'll update soon
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March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good story better than 3/4 of stories now on AFF! G
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February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I cant stop imagining jabari as one of those old rich aunties that bring you presents every time they visit and sneak you candy right before bedtime. This chapter was very interesting and i hope you'll update soon!
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February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Bali and Ghani are so cute. Ghani in a mischievous way (which has really surprised me given how closed off he was initailly GREAT character development) and Bali in an equally mischievous but really sweet way. Anyway, I really hope this new guy doesn't turn out to be a complete foreskin. He seems really charming but as I recall Tariq Hassal was pretty charismatic in the beginning too.
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February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this since you first started posting on AFF and I'm in love with the social constructs, your characters and all of the dynamics that they have to swim through. Zhas is flawed and I really appreciate that in a character, and it lends a refreshed realism to the story. Post again soon, and happy writing!
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January 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was practically crying when Zhas asked Zhas asked Myla to marry him. My favorite thing about this story so far is getting to see more of Zhas' personality and how he reacts experiencing new things.
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January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg, so many chapters so quickly! Yes! I really like Maarik. Looking forward for more
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January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, Zhas seems to be doing so much better with Marrik. I hope it last and I hope his new friendship is beneficial for him. I can't help but want the best for Zhas.
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January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is well done, it always holds my interest and makes me want to read more! Gslinger
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January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited! Zhas has freedom and camels! I'm kind of worried about the romantic aspect though; I don't want him to end up in an abusive relationship or something. I am really curious about how he'll be recieved at the baths too. Omg I'm just excited at everything!