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Nice place to leave it. Hope not for long. Good cliffhanger. What is going to happen to the island. Only you know and will let us know when you are ready to release the next chapter when the muse gets to you. Please do not let it be to long of a wait. Good luck in the coming year.

Fine story - well written. Surprised BUT very pleased thagtyou were able to post again so quickly. Waiting on the next one/

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Great and loving story. Enjoyed the way that they show their love to each other with their feelings. Also enjoy the small cliffhangers.

Only question is what year does the story take place in, because if it takes place before 1776 there was no American flag go fly as we still belonged to England and would have flown theirs.

I am believing that it took place after 1776 because you mentioned the Constellation and that was built in the 1780's I believe.

Other than that it is a great story and I will be waiting for the next chapter to see if they are able to keep the island from the French.

really enjoyable chapter. Nice to see the captain get married and the crew more concerned about how she would feel if the captain was lost in the storm. I am sure he can not wait to hear how Dylan and his crew captured the two ships.

will be waiting for the next chapters to this fun and enjoyable story.

Nice story. A nice change of pace from what is usually on this and similar sites. Question !! When is the next chapter??

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