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by pseudocide335

person Avelynn
schedule January 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nope, no chance, I creid again T_T
I don't believe Bali is dead.
From what I''ve seen of his character he seems like a coward outside his own house.
person iriskzk1
schedule January 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope Maarik has a plan because if not Zhas is in for a world of hurt. I can see Tariq freaking out when he find out and he will because Maq is going to tell. I don't understand what his problem is. He is cruel for no reason at all.
person jennifer
schedule January 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was really worried that we'd lose Zhas for a second. It seemed so final. And I really hope Maq falls and breaks his hip or something he is beyond irritating. This chapter was so intense
person Avelynn
schedule January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there is any storie of yours that haven't made me cry yet. I love you Wanda!
person jennifer
schedule January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me so sad! I feel so awful for poor Zhas. I wonder if anyone notices that Hassal's zhalja just disappeared from the puplic eye? Or does he have a reputation for being really jealous and controlling? I'm looking forward to the next chapter so much!
person toolazytologin
schedule January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love it pls keep going
person iriskzk1
schedule January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Zhas:( I can't stand Maq, I wish someone would push him out a window. I can't imagine what's going to happen to Zhas now but I don't think he has to worry about Bali. They're not going to catch him.
person Hatty
schedule January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really love your story and can't wait for more!

I admire that you created such complex character and took time to show how slavery work - I cannot stand stories where slave is abused by master and they live happilly ever after.

Your story made my cry and I was in very morbid mood after chapter 7 for 2 days. Continue with this amazing work, please. :) Ignoring facts doesnot make them any less true.

sorry for spelling error - I'm exausted, but I wanted to review this amazing story.
person jennifer
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is really really good like "never-put-it-down" good. It's like zhaljas are just glorified slaves to Hassal or something. I'm so excited for the next chapter!
person iriskzk1
schedule December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What the heck is Maq's problem, he is really starting to work my nerves. Poor Zhas. He is trying so hard and it's only going to get worse. I love your story by the way and check constantly and daily for updates.

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