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March 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet. The pacing of Ken's "foreplay" with Rina is good. The "big girl" enticement, although not a brand-new idea, is a classic for a reason: It's entirely plausible (particularly when the seducer is an older sibling whom the younger one is motivated to convince of her maturity). I was happy that Rina ended up enjoying the experience and (for a mix of reasons) wanting more. Nicely done.
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June 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Please write again soon!
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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I had a hard time getting through the first couple lines. You said the girl was 7, but you made her sound like she was 3. Is she mentally handicapped in some way you didn't mention?
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December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a fun story. I'd like to read more.
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice story more please