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Another great double chapter I love this story. It does seem.though that we never get enough from other people's perspectives. For example what is happening with Evelin? Does Denise ever participate or is she an office monkey? What happens at school and counselling with Matt? What ever happened to ryan? I have other questions but I can't remember all the characters names. There's the guy who always throws jibes at Joseph what's his major malfunction? You also mention Joseph has dreams of his past. Any chance we could "see" one of those?
I know this is a lot of questions and you probably won't be able to answer them all at once. Keep up the good work I.love all.your stories.

CCH

OK... So Troy has apologized for the brands, seems to care about the twins and their individual needs, kinda getting attached to Andre, especially. "Because I wanted to save something beautiful" almost won me over, but I will continue to wait for that other shoe to fall, cause I know it's gonna...eventually. What the hell is Joseph doing bartering for a book he doesn't want.. Guess we wait to see on that one, too. Guess I needed the reminder of how screwed up Joseph is, and another reminder of how much Joseph has buried, forgotten or blocked out mentally. And I will save all my questions about Uncle Dale when and if we meet again. By the way, who says that the world doesn't revolve around Joseph, even if I did enjoy touching base with Troy for a time.

I hope a happy ending for Joseph.. keep writing, you are so fast

Another review bit the dust with my moody tablet's maybe -maybe not internet connection. I will try again later. Lots to say and speculate about.

So much past few chapters. And I still think there is something very important in that file that I am sure is still gathering dust. Joseph was sold cheap to Web.. Why was Troy willing to pay so much to own him outright? Love? maybe but I don't think so.. As sweet as he has been, he still irritates me... Branded my beautiful twins.. for what or why?(he doesn't care about them) Makes them crawl because they slink (OK maybe I can see that). Keeping things that involve Joseph from him.. Kudos to Curtis for spilling the beans.. and I hope that he and Matt really don't hurt each other and can both heal.. way too young. I'm sure I forgot something in this review that was in the one that didn't post.

Another great update, but you're starting to kill me here. Poor poor Joseph! At the end of every chapter I just want Troy to love Joseph and make everything better but I have to tell myself that there's still so much story to be told. I may be losing my mind with Joseph, but that's what makes this story so good! Happy writing!

Well, I see Troy becoming quite the loving type, and I see Joseph becoming quite the 'take charge and fix it' teacher that old man Salway was trying to groom him for from the get go. I can picture a few directions for those 2 to go.

Nice. Those baby steps are adding up and getting a bit further in the right direction:-) Matt's gonna be fine. Shoot, you even cured my wariness of Troy.. And I think I might have an inkling about that file. I think the previous chapter gave me a hint that didn't even register until I saw it gathering dust. I'm not sure if I want my suspicions to be right or not.. If I'm right, I hope it's because of a lot of foreshadowing... looking forward to the next update, and congrats on the upcoming wedding.

OH MY GOD... This story is turning out even more amazing with every chapter, and I am in absolute love with this dynamic relationship that Troy and Joseph seem to have. I like how you're kind of cracking Joseph a bit too. I can't wait for the next chapters! So excited!

Finally, Joseph is heading in a direction toward getting himself what help he needs.. baby steps but at least the right direction I think. Matt is frustrated with his body's conditioned response. Good sign.. I was imagining him having to sell himself back into slavery just to get through puberty.. Shoot, was that even a possibility? And Troy.. Maybe he isn't a total ass, but I hope Joseph's judgment of him continues to improve. And what is in Joseph's file that he needs to know.. I don't believe for a moment that it's just a red herring being tossed at us. Thanks again, and will be waiting for Friday and hoping for a big buffer of extra chapters.