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I really like Matt and the interaction he has with Joseph. I can´t wait for that boy to grown up and see what happens next =). Keep writing, I love your soty

Yes, something to chew on. Are we ever gonna get into that file, or are you saving it for the next book? Funny, I had gone back trying to get a feel for Heath's age (pretty close to Troy's but I couldn't remember for sure) and found where Troy told Joseph his father is a liar and he should read it. Until this chapter, I thought Joseph was leaning toward Heath, and Troy was backpaddling, but I'm liking Troy today, not that Joseph ever needed my approval. I still want Joseph to want things for himself that he will won't as long as he wears his scars, both inside and out, like badges of honor. I think that's mostly me trying to put his mindset into something that my mind can understand, though. I have some questions about companion slaves I will ask in e-mail.

I'm not sure about this chapter it felt like just a fill in rushed and skimmed over nothing to really get into. Not your usual standard. I understand not every chapter can be a knockout but I was a little disappointed. Sorry if this sounds negative. You are a great writer keep up the good work

aww, it was already planned? I hoped I had inspired you to do it...

I find it funny how, in this alternate world, brothels being legal requires them having quality control, making the risk of STD's not a problem for those who can afford it :)

Although I also crave Joseph thoughts, me thinks that what you see is what you get, here. Joseph's in work mode, and again, as usual, gives it his all. More info than I wanted when he told Everett how to think of M.. too much insight to how he thinks of himself..(and damn Salway for that, too.) Joseph is damn good at the teaching, though. Nice job taking something that I also find rather ick and making it hot. Guess we might get some insight into how many more kinks and quirks Everett has that left him friendless at school.

I'm always excited to see this story updated :) The Stanton household I think could use a little excitement lol Drew just seems so unimpressed. As for Everett and Marcus they're alright. Bathroom play for me is an ick, although enemas can sometimes be pretty hot. I'd like to get more monologue from Joseph though. That's something I struggle with in my writing, especially when it's in third person, but I find that monologue into a character's thoughts and feelings while certain things are happening adds so much more to both character and story. I do crave me some Joseph thoughts when I read this. :P

Seems to me that Joseph is just plain exploring all his possibilities and then some. Gotta wonder what is going though his head. To be or not to be... a slave or free? ("why would I buy myself out..."), in love? with whom? Troy? (I think he is trying to sort his own feelings about Troy.. is it love or love of being owned?). Joseph has tried to sort this 'love' thing out forever, but gets stuck somewhere between the making love, being used, and just wanting to be wanted. Will be interesting to watch the training of lovers, both master and slave with Everett and M. One minute it amazes me how together Joseph seems to be in spite of his past, and the next I wonder if he is thinking at all. Gotta wonder, would Troy be interested at all if Joseph wasn't a slave? Would Heath? I'm pretty sure that Joseph wonders, too, but probably not a good thing for a slave to ask. OK, Eve, where is your mind taking us next?.. I'm already starting to pack for a long trip..:-)

I love extra updates:-) was nice to see Joseph just pretty much taking his own wants into account, and another inkling that he can relax when not expecting pain. (Pain is still something I have a hard time wrapping my mind around). Uncle Dale had been gentle, something that he couldn't hope for from others, when he was younger, for risk of hurting himself more. Another reminder that Joseph really wants to be number 1 somewhere.. Heath's mansion, Troy's, for Matt.. somewhere, anywhere, everywhere? Doesn't everyone desire something similar to that, though, at least in our relationships? Now that everyone else has eased up about Curtis, I'd like more info. More history on him or something to help explain why he kept going back to Dale and then presented himself as a victim when explaining to Joseph. That may answer why Dale gave Curtis the Classic since he didn't know about tie-ins with Joseph or Matt. Gotta wonder if this thing with Heath is gonna go anywhere. Prefer to see him move on rather than back to Evelyn, if those were his choices, although some time with Evelyn might be nice. And Troy is not off the hook. Salway was a principal training force in Troy, Matt, and Joseph's lives, and has all of their emotions screwed up.

It was so nice to see your e-mail show up. Been checking the list for hours, and decided that the double last week just made up for this week. Then I remember that you are still a newly wed and might have a life outside of writing for me and you post something that looks like you used my questions and thoughts for an outline.. No life for you.. and thank you. You,re still gonna tease about that file, but when it comes it'll be good. I think that will be when Joseph can finally buy himself out emotionally, since financially isn't a problem. As well as filling in memory lapses, I think there is another surprise in there, too. Loved his session with Gina, but hope he doesn't give her the file. Now, why was Asshole Salway willing to share Joseph and not Matt? And why the fodder to over-think Curtis's intentions? And whatever happened to the girlfriend that Troy broke?