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Ooh, good answer on the coffee pot. That's so true- I can't even work a ton of coffee pots and I know how to use the old-fashioned ones, mostly. And some Keurigs. Ryan is hard to pin down by name because Joseph calls him Cavendish, which is much more distinctive. I must have overlooked Ryan's father coming into the Web. Sounds like he's entering the internet in the 2000s, heheheh. Is money much more of a rarity? Since $50 sounds like a lot? Or was it just surprise that Joseph asked for money at all?

It's amusing that Ryan was totally unamused at Joseph naming off Evelyn and Mike's transitions into adults doing chores. I've realized at this point, some 1/7th into chapter two, that I much prefer Joseph as a dom. It's so delicious.

Why did Joseph not want Matt around when Ryan left? Omg I can't believe they were each others' firsts. I can't believe that was the first time Joseph actually had a lover, even just for the moment. Did Ryan have such an issue with Joseph talking down to him because they were the same age? I liked the insight that they had into one another, like when Ryan said Joseph overanalyzed and overestimated people. And that people trusted him to keep quiet and keep his judgments to himself.

Hahaha, basket cases.

I just spent every free second I had for the last week reading part one and two and, just wow. I am dying to know how Joseph will handle being free, and I so didn't see him being related to Troy and Denise coming, that was a great twist.

Also just LOVE Ryan. its cool that he found a Dom hope he can still play with Joseph.can't wait for next one to be ready ur story is Alsome.

This is my favorite series. I look forward to reading it every week. Thank you for your hard work and amazing style. I look forward to the next one. You call them books, are they available on Amazon or E readers?

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Not sure if I ever commented on this story before but I just wanted to say how much this chapter broke my heart. Although I think it is the best thing for Joseph as he would never have broken away from Troy otherwise. The Fact That His Own Father Did such terribe things to him when he was hours old is sickening. I'm glad Joseph is free will be interesting to see how he adjusts. I know he's been living more or less free for a while now but how will he cope mentally. How will Troy cope mentally. The fact that they are brothers may be why they were drawn to eachother in the first place.
I think Matt will be happy about Joseph being free and possibly away from Troy in a sexual way but again I wonder how he will react when he finds out who Joesph's father is.
I do love Matt's character. I love the way he's so mature most of the time but then there are glimpses of him being a kid.
Looking forward to the next chapter....I think...

A few questions (apologies if I've missed explanations) about things I don't understand:

Who would have taken the photos of James and Diana after the birth?

James seems, as much or more than Diana, to be a fixation of Salway's. Just because James was unbreakable or was there more history?

Was Joseph's file this complete when he lived with Evlyn? And did her dad read it? Because considering he and Salway's kids all present themselves especially as against what Salway does and there was that scene where the investigator was talking to Joseph about catching Salway doing illegal underage slave things, wouldn't Salway's own journal convict him? I think you've said he kept a record of everything he did to Joseph?

Troy and Denise have rejected Salway. But they maintain a relationship with their mother? How can she be unknowing of what he is or ok with it and Troy and Denise still maintain contact?

Thanks

well damn. knew that file was important... now gotta wait for the dna results... not sure which way that will fall.. sorta thought he and Matt would be brothers.. guess that is still possible, too, if his real dad wasn't the one that was killed... that would be a real mess for Salway, wouldn't it.. not so good for his feelings for Troy, though (do I appear disappointed with that thought?).. Starting to see some light in Joseph's situation, and ways to still be a parental figure for Matt (shoot, I'm trying to raise both of them, now.).. That file has a lot more important info in there.. That was not the stuff that Troy thinks he needs to know. I like the job change very much.. Thanks for the chapter, Eve:)

finally seeing some of those emotional ties unravel, at least with Heath.. (maybe even has his replacement in training, so it seems) Wish I liked Troy more, because he does seem to be what Joseph really wants. Just because I can't wrap my mind around that being a good relationship shouldn't be a deal breaker for Joseph, I guess.. Hell, I wonder when I took him to raise, lol. The extra boost to Joseph's bank account should make it Possible for him to 'retire' a bit sooner than previously planned..wonder what the Web's cut of that gig was.. Also wonder how Matt is doing, and how bad the relationship breakdown with Curtis was..

Considering the amount of abuse Joseph has endured previously, it seems as though he was quite overpaid for what Heath did. Maybe there was more left described though that's not usual for this work. Or is half a mil what Joseph gets for a week?