rate_review Reviews

Wow. The story is really intense. I'm kind of speechless. Even though I'm kind of grossed out by the last chapter, I know as soon as a new one comes. i will read it.

I'm trying to figure out if the psychic can end up being a good guy. Wondering if his talent is knowing all the various permutations that will follow from actions. So maybe he has to do things or let things happen, knowing the alternative is worse. Which could explain the awful things that happen to Margot and what appears to be his torment. And maybe if he tells her about it that could also change destiny and make it worse. Other than that,I don't see any light at the end of the tunnel for poor Margot. I'm probably way off but I'm a happy ending slut.

Regardless,you're a talented writer and I hope you'll complete this story. Well done and thanks.

I am really invested in finding out what happens next. Please update soon! You are a really good writer, and I'm surprised by how clever and funny this is sometimes.

Well I'm following this, so please keep it up!