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for The Psychic

by AuburnRedding

person Tahn
schedule August 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So, I've been reading this story since the beginning, and it's making me curious as to just what this is all building up to. Where is it heading? Looking forward to finding out.
person Tahn
schedule June 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, what is going on?
schedule June 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! I know this is bad.. but I totally hope she's pregnant! Lol.. I know this is not supposed to be a warm-fuzzy story but I can't help but think a mini psychic would be super cute.. :P
person Tahn
schedule June 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, what's going on?
person Tahn
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It does make me wonder if she's ever gonna get out of there, and if she ever gets the chance if she will actually go after all of this.
person Tahn
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why does he keep hurting her if he's trying to make her happy? Someone's got their world views skewed.
schedule April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story and the mind games that are playing out (you've done a very good job portraying that!). I did get the impression from the start he was lonely (life for a super villain probably is!), and that he does want companionship, but obviously doesn't know how to go about it in a healthy way. Anyways, just thought I'd review :) Please keep writing, I'm looking forward to see where you take this.
person devil14
schedule March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! I love it!
Can't wait for your next update. Please update soon...thank you
person Nuki
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it could get any weirder....
I was wrong...

It's a very fascinating story. You're doing a great job.
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Finally! But will she remember it?