I hope one day you guys come back and continue this story. I'm so curious how it will play out.
More! More! More!! :-)
I just reread this story and I wanted to tell you how much I adore this stroy!!!! I really love how much time you take to develop the different charakters and how you show us the different dynamics in the pairungs in fitting enviroments!!!! I can't wait for the jinx x makva in the next chapter!!! And I'm eager to see which other mopwers Nyklas has!!!! I'm also eager to see Nyklas explore his relationship with the other members of the harem!!!! I'm really sad to see that you didn't update for so long and I hope my review might motivate you to return to this story and to post an chapter again!!!! I would really be sad to see this story get abandoned because it starts so promising!!!! I mean we are just getting the story started at this point after we got to know everybody!!!! I really hope to see an update from you again soon!!!!
Oh my god a double update!!!! You made me so happy!!! I really adored the sweet scene with Than and Nyk!!!! And finally we see some smutt between zeke and Bel!!!! So adorable those two!!!! I so damn happy that you updated this fantastic story!!!! Really hope to hear from you again soon!!!!
Yay! I'm super happy you are back!!! And we get two for the price of one, woo! I feel like this is the sweet calm before the storm. I hope they can enjoy their bit of peace before it gets shattered.
Oh where oh where have you two gone?!? I miss you re characters something fierce...please update soonâ¤ï¸
This story deserves to be written to it conclusion. PLEASE PLEAE PLEASE. If it takes a more serious persuasion, How much would it cost to pay you to finish? I love the story, the ending could practically write itself.
Your fans continue to wait and wait. don't leave us hangin!!!!!
with appreciation to a good writer
Ch 23
The neko looked back to see the incubus trying to urge Mavka on from where the dryad had seemed to have paused to have a conversation with a houseplant.
- LMAO
Mavka finally sat when Nyklas moved the little potted violet from a side table to the dryad's place-setting.
- LMAO
The neko was beginning to calm down some, but he could also sense that something about his family was very off, and that kept him on edge.
- It's side effects from the icky black curse/spell/thing!
Nyklas and Jinx shared a bewildered glance at each other, both boys wondering if the others were starting to go crazy.
- LMAO, them violets groping bees.
Than's golden eyes narrowed on his angel as Ezekiel passed Nyklas' seat, catching the flash of the blond's pale hand dropping casually to the table and swiftly tucking his theft in his tunic, out of sight.
- Uh-oh, that doesn't sound good.
Ezekiel lowered his eyes, his jaw clenched tight. He hesitated, but finally reached into his tunic and pulled out a silver, serrated dinner knife.
- Oooooo, someone's in trouble.
"Why won't you let me die!?" The angel wailed, trying to pull away from the two.
"Because I love you and I'm a selfish beast," the incubus said simply, leaning forward.
- Aw, it would have been better if he yelled it to his face..."BECAUSE! i LOVE you and I'm a selfish BEAST, damn it" ...that's how I first read it until I read "incubus said simply" and realized 'oh, he's being calm and calculated about it...oops.'
'Thanatos growled and shoved the tip of one thumb into the joint in front of the boy's ear, making his mouth snap open reflexively.'
- ...a trick he learned from a Sifter Dentist, of all things. He had but a sliver of comfort at the fact that those Sidhe had a hell of a lot more problems on a daily basis than his precious family. (I just had to)
"You've gotten weak," the demon snapped, his slitted pupils constricted. "You can't protect us anymore. Just some simple healing left you in a puddle on the floor."
"Belial, we don't have time for this," Thanatos growled, pulling himself to his feet.
- Looks like someone needs a good spanking.
No. Mavka couldn't leave him.
With a strength Jinx didn't know he had, he tore away the final vine holding the dryad
- Woo! Go Jinxie!
Ch 24
When he'd coughed the taint from his body he forced a weary grin.
"Can we try again?" Belial asked with a wink. "Just in case we missed a bit? Maybe with more tongue, this time?"
- LMAO! I'm with Belial!
Belial cleared his throat, sharp white teeth gleaming in a grin when he caught Ezekiel's eye. The demon lounged back on the bed next to the sleeping Nyklas. Belial curled one finger to beckon the angel. Ezekiel couldn’t help huffing a little laugh. In the middle of everything that had been happening, Belial was still teasing. Somehow, it made the angel feel a little better, like it was a sign that things were going to be alright.
- *fangirl swooning* My OTP~
“You love it.” Belial smirked, but it quickly faded, leaving him looking sad. “I’m… Well, I’m sorry if I’ve been more of an asshole than usual.” He glanced down, looking upset. “Even with how messed up I was, seeing you hurt and bleeding like that… It made me feel like something was trying to chop out my damned heart. Made me think... Well, I guess that it would be really shitty if you weren't around anymore. I think I… I kind of love you… A lot.”
- *gushing fangirl gears* My OTP~
"You were just trying to be playful in the beginning. It was my fault because I pushed you to act that way... I don't blame you for anything. And I... well..." The angel hesitated and bit his lip. "I-I love you a lot too, Belial," he finally whispered, his fair cheeks blushing deeply
- *even more fangirl tears, a waterfall at this point* My OTP~
"There's no trace of poison in you, so perhaps we can continue this later? Maybe in your room?" The angel spoke softly, his words meant only for Belial.
- Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~
"It's not 'in' him, but it's... clinging to him. If that makes any sense..."
- Eewww! Let Nyk go!! Icky, icky.
"We kill the Necromancer and scatter his followers like ashes."
- Yes, get that fucker! Get him good.
I'm glad this update came fast. Seeing the dryad so broken broke my heart. I can't wait for the next update.