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for Overlords: Companion

by MetalBikiniExtraLarge

schedule April 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This took an interesting turn. Loving the story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Xoxo Robin

schedule April 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Really wonderful story. I hope the next be if as one as this one. Xoxo Robin

person My_perversities
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is just too cute!! I was a little concerned when I found out about the forced multiple partners and possible abuse. But when he was kept with just the pair of them and told because of the pregnancy he wouldn't ever be with anyone else, that was an Awww moment for me. Loved it.
person Meme
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and read it all in one sitting, but I'm wondering an hoping for a sequal or story arc
person Angel
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm just wondering why it was never addressed as to the reason he was put back into the cage right before all 3 if them became a "couple". Good for them that they're all a happy family now. But still..
person Girlygirl
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't sure that I would like this story. Boy, was I surprised. I loved this story. The idea was original and the world that you built was great. Loved Kayd, Jon and Tag and know that Jon wouldn't be shared made me go YAY!!! And the ending was perfect and funny. Getting a dress and new trainers...lol. Thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next installment.
person littleolmee
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have come to look forward to the times I find you write something. Was very excited to see it was 10 chapters; all of them wonderfully written. Loved the story, characters, & the world you put them in. You certainly have the Mpreg well thought out too. I know I'll be marking this as one I'll read again. Thank you for sharing it. I hope to see more from you.
person Tahn
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the other sets of series come out.
person higashi
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I gave this story a chance, as it was an amazing read! I love sci-fi pwp-ish stories, and loved your attention to world building.

Would I be correct to assume that Kaothians insist on multiple partners for their Companions as a method to discover a fertile triad-ic combunation?

Anyway, Jon was one lucky guy, all things considered, and his Overlord lovers are such cuties!

I'll certainly keep an eye on more of this series. Thanks for writing!