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Truly a wonderful beginning to a story with Top and Biff (although I think I am much prefering Biffy). Hope you pick it back up again because I would love to see where this all goes. :3

Please update again soon! Its so hard to find such original and hot stories like this one

Very fun story. I was prepared to be annoyed by Bif, but he's just too sweet and endearing. I'm interested in seeing their relationship grow. The eventual interaction with Bif's dad should be interesting and possibly explosive. Thanks for sharing your story. If you have a mailing list for updates please add me. Xoxo Robin

This is a good idea! I really like the concept and hope you make more.

Please come back. I need you we all need you we cant go on without you dont leave us

Totally in love with it! You havta update soon because i just cant wait to read more of this lovely story ! :)

What a lovely story. I have been meaning to read it for some time now. I just finished Chapter 1 and I am excited to find out what Top has been thinking all this time. Biff is such a sweet character. It seems like his father never tried to help him with his dyslexia. He definitely deserves to have a nice hot alien to call his own. I hope Top will stay with him. I really like the way you describe Tops gradual melting ant taking shape and the first encounter between him and Biff.

Ah Biff and Top are so hilarious together. Love their bedroom scene. I laughed when Top said "I'm going out of my mind and this weird human body wants something!” Top is so smart, I hope he will be able to help Biff out with his farm. I wonder how he will react if and when Biff tells him that he has trouble reading. He should already know that Biff is different. I am so sad for Biff because I enjoy reading so much. Really fun story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I like this story, mostly for it's humour and unusual pairing. I like Top, but I wonder for how long he'll be sidetracked by Biff before he goes back to wanting to dominate the world... In any case I’m curious how their interactions will evolve. I hope they get really kinky next time  Although, some other reviewer mentioned she (no doubt about that one’s gender) wishes this were an mpreg story. For the love of whatever deity you worship, if any, please don't. Apart form that, anything you write will probably please me. Because you’re awesome. For writing this story, but mostly for being vegan!

This chapter was fabulous as always!! I loved their little sexcapade and can't wait to see how their relationship develops. I'm a bit curious as to how Top is going to react when he discovers the extreme bias towards gays including Biff's own upbringing. Can't wait for the next one! I just love this story, keep truckin' along. ;)