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for In Fair Verona

by Yblue

person jjmari
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I keep checking to see if this story is updating or not. I love it and I'm very interested in the characters. I enjoy the way you write and I hope you keep it up. I would absolutely love if this would update, but I understand, life can get in the way. You've got something here. Keep it up regardless of finishing this story or not. :)
person Tahn
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'll bet that message doesn't go over well.
person Pansy
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
"Oh, I love girls. I love Shauni. I want Shauni. But why the hell did I imagine the fantasies about Alistair, damn it?" Romes!Romes! Romes! What a poor fellow. Now he's confused about his sexuality and he doesn't know what to do. His next meeting with Alistair will be very interesting. And his family! I hate his violent, abusive, razor- tongued sister. I wanted to rip her head off when she was on top of Romes(Bentley) and hurt him. But I don't know the whole story yet so I keep that thought to myself.
Thank you for this new chapter and no need to say I'll be waiting for more.
person kholm
schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love the characters and your writing. Looking forward to the next update. :)
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting characters, and great writing style, looking forward to more.
person Pansy
schedule November 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Been a long time since "Unconditional love". Welcome back!!! And such an interesting start! Please give us more very soon.
person Elo
schedule November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I thinking this is the forst review I've written ever, bur I must say you do a really good jobbet with the realism in your story and characters. I really appreciate that because these fairytale dudes living in some alternate universe where everybody is gay/nympho/in the closet really kills it for me. I look forward to this particular closet case getting to knop himself though ;) Don't go easy on him!