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March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was reading this story a while back and lost it. When I stumbled upon it again I was so happy to see it was finished so I could read it all, but you made me cry. It was well done, Terry sucked at owning a slave, but he made Aubrey a better person. I just wish he could have seen or known about the baby. I at least hope he knew how much of an impact he had in Aubrey's life.
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December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It was the perfect length...and I know you like getting reviews and they help but you shouldn't be sorry for how it ended. It was perfect and I love how jack yelled out that Terry wasnt old...very funny!
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December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you ended it. I'm sure there are a few people that won't agree but I don't think you needed to tag his death. It needs to be a shock for it to have the same impact. I've got to admit that I didn't know what MCD meant originally anyway. I think that the way Aubrey dressed for the funeral was very moving. Thanks for writing this story, I really enjoyed it.
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December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The last line in chapter 6 was full of the sweet feels. Aubrey is finally more comfortable and confident about his life.
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December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Ch 5 was so loaded with emotions. I really enjoyed it, and seeing Aubrey show emotion during sex was really satisfying, even if his emotions were fear and disgust. Keep up the good work!
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November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4: Terry.... oh the words to describe him. I enjoy the way he pushes Audrey to be a better person. He has some harsh words and actions, but they only add to the appeal of his character. Terry seems to want Audrey to man up and take control over his life. The character development was very good in this chapter. Keep up the good work.
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November 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 did not disappoint, but I am curious about what happened for three months. The story would fell richer if you elaborated more on that part. Mentioning more personal changes in how Aubrey is coping or even small things they did. Like if Aubrey got his license or something.
I really did enjoy the chapter. The concert scene was very interesting. Keep writing, your work is a refreshing take on the slave relationship.
I really did enjoy the chapter. The concert scene was very interesting. Keep writing, your work is a refreshing take on the slave relationship.
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November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That last segement of chapter 2 was so sad, but it was good to know what kind of back story Aubrey had. I enjoy their relationship so much and how you reveal little bits about them at a time. I can't wait for when Aubrey does not feel there is a negative cconsequence for his actions. Your writing is wondering.
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November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story is could see it getting interesting it is well written and left me wanting more.
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November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting take on the master slave relationship. Keep up the great writing.