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Update soon please! I just revisited and love this story, 

Ome gawds!!!! I love this story! Please PLEASE update soon! Poor Al! I hope he is well!

Gasp. Poor Al. How painful for him to come across Luna like that. Prince Alex seems like he is kind of a jerk anyway. How heartbreaking. Great story.

Can't wait to read more, good job.

Oh poor al!!! I really hate him walking in on that!!!! And the prince is strange, for same sex relationships beeing forbidden his is a lot to open to this... I'm really suspicious!!! I will check out your new stroy though not tonight its already quite late at my place and my work killed me today^^ See you again soon!!!!

I like this story a lot, it's really cute and the charecters are very appealing :) I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship anf story develops!

Hello I sent you a pm on the forum, not sure if you got it though. Anyways this story is good. I like the idea of the captor breaking free and looking for the prince himself.

Oh my god luna really has no idea how the wold works^^Its really funny^^ I thought with everything he could see he would understand a bit more but I guess not^^I wonder when Al will see how naive Luna is and explain things to him^^ I really liked to see the embrassed Al, it was really cute!!!! Thanks a lot for the post and see you again soon!!!!

Oh my god that was hot!!!! Luna is really a bit crul leaving Al there and disapearing^^I loved their reaction to his powers^^Can't wait to read more of this!!!!

I really enjoyed the beginning of chapter 3, but then towards the end I noticed a huge personality change in Luna. Not the part where he was a little cold towards the men because that makes sense. He was in a tower for years surrounding by people who feared him thats not the part I am having trouble with. Its where Luna pushes Ai to show him how to do it with men. And I really didn't like that Al showed him. (And I have a feeling that Luna may reverse time so it never happened for Al). Al being the one who wouldn't even flirt with Luna in the beginning. Its just too big of a 360 for me. I am going to have to drop this story unless the bottom half is rewritten so it makes sense with the story. Not trying to mean just my opinion. Good luck!