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for Hollow Earth

by Windstryke

person Miku_Sui
schedule July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! Thank god they're finally back in the picture together again! Save Azel!
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, their won't be another Theorin and Reggie sex scene. Reggie was and still is likable but its annoying that his solution to fixing Theorin is to have sex with him. I skip over there sex scenes it in no way compares to how awesome Theorin and Azels sex scene was (heart Theorin and Azel :)
person smint45
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chappy hope Teorin will be able to help azel^^ See you again soon!!!
person Moku_Sui
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused about why Azel is there, but Azel really needs to see Theorin
person Blue
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story tonight and it was fantastic, but I so badly need Theorin and Azel to have a moment. It seems like alot of time has passed since they have shown affection towards eachother. It's worrying and sad that Theorin is falling back into what I feel is a slave mentality, which arguably makes it easier for him to cope. I simply adore it though when he himself with Azel and that he is more of the dominant partner in the sort of not entirely established relationship. Please update soon-
Sincerely,
Your newest reader - Blue
person smint45
schedule May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great update!!! I hope you don't kill Azel^^ He has to take over the mine to help the slaves!!! Thanks so much for the update and see you again soon!!!!
person anon-ish
schedule May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW THAT WAS INTENSE! I hope Azel will get his mind and body back in order soon! Will this have a happy ending? I hope purple eyes and Azel get back together! I'm kinda hoping the uncle has a heart attack even though he was being kinda towards the end of this chapter!
person Moku_Sui
schedule May 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really good. Poor Azel though...
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I'm wondering if a breaking point / realization is due to Azel soon. I hope so, I want his character to evolve, and since you said they're reuniting, then something gotta change and I don't think it'll be Azel's uncle (unless his uncle dies unexpectedly and Azel gets his inheritance, but that feels a little too convenient)

I was surprised by how rough Reggie ended up being, since he said he didn't like violence, I mean, I can understand needing to be heavy to make things 'right' in Theorin's head again, but I just hadn't seen it coming.

Good luck with the writing, looking forward to the next chapter, wondering if we'll be seeing the cyclops.
person smint45
schedule May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I kind of figured something like this was going to happen. I'm glad Theorin feels better after this but that didn't make it easier to read. I'm glad though that we will see Azel again^^ Thanks a lot for the update and see you again soon!!!!