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You have a few word choice errors and a large continuity error (the panther's thought about the things he would do with his mate should he acquire one and the fact that he has one). Other than that the first 6 chapters read o.k.

Wonder how this is gonna turn out.

alright.. Where to begin.. Compared to the first written chapters, these revised ones are much better.. they go into more detail about the Rabbit and Panther. the way they are reworded is very nice and creative.. The way you started the story shows more insight into the Rabbits past and of course why she likes to sneak off from the castle, but its always because they get into so much wonderful trouble.. I suck at reviews Ritzu.. i'll be waiting for the other chapters.. better not let me down..

i remember starting this story, & thinking it would be a slightly dramatized fluff. boy am I glad I was wrong, & that I kept on reading!!! I hope bunny girls situation improves more in the next few chapters as she and the panther try to simply communicate with each other. it would be odd if neither ! developed curiosity about the nature or background of the other, especially the panther, who should wonder about the daughter of an infamous immortal king. plz update soon, and sorry I haven't reviewed the last couple chapters, my internet access is severely curbed @ for the time being, and I can only read and review a few mornings a week. keep up the great work!!!

Rukia

I really enjoyed these last 2 chapters. The last chapter with the fiancee appearing out of the blue was quite a surprise. Didn't expect that at all.
Thanks for making chapter 5 much longer. Perfect length! =)
Can't wait for the next update!

Yikes! This is cray!

I really like this story! Quite unique! Just wish the chapters were much longer. =)

I wish your chapters were longer! Really can't wait for the next on!!!!

:-Dthank u for being so prompt & polite!!! I enjoyd the way u described the flashback as an old memory would be, as oposed 2 a recent 1 w mor vivid details, good job! I hope u update again soon, Im lookin forward to seeing the entwining of these twos fate!!!

Rukia

Fun beginning, can't wait for the next update.