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Very cute. I look forward to more from this story.

Well i did like this chap, but the kittens description of events was a Lily unrealistic. I cant think of any instance where "my little human mouth" would describe myself that way. And also the descriptions of his previous owners is vague to the point of distraction, it doesn't describe their appearences, sure, but what bugs me is the lack of motivation to the actions. Wife washes me, wich enrages husband and causes son to attempt 2 drown me. . .(???). The concept and plot r awesome, it just needs some vamping n places

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Good good good. I like the way you depicted Volt's protectiveness and I think this chapter ran rather smoothly, giving and adequate peek into Feria's past. I can't wait to read the next one~

Woooo great first chapter. I love your wording and the way you set everything up. It makes me excited about the next chapter. The only thing I have to complain about is the shortness of it (though I really have no room to talk lol). Great job! I look forward to the next chapter. :D

This story is absolutely adorable!!! I can't wait 2 c were this leads! My only complaint would probably hav 2 b the lack of descriptions of characters and the rapid progression it causes. Plz update soon & i hope u consider wat I've said