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This story is great! I really like Shadow Walker & White Dawn together. Shadow Walker is possessive and dominant....which I love. Would be awesome if you could update at least once a week! =)

I like this and hope you continue it.

I really enjoyed reading the first chapter to your story! I would love to read a flashback scene explaining what happened after Jonathan's mother told him to take his sister and run. Were their parents killed by Gray Bear's tribe or another tribe of Indians? I would like to see Jonathan's & Shadow Walker's meeting for the first time when they were children and what they thought of each other. Did the cavalry or anyone come looking for them after what I am assuming was a massacre and their parents and any other family members were probably killed? What kind of Indians are they? Camanche, Apache, Cherokee, etc.

I can't wait for chapter two and bet Shadow Walker will see White Dawn washing naked in the river so am excited to read what happens next.

Very good first chapter, I did notice a few minor spelling mistakes but they didn't bother me at all.

Please update again soon! Thank you for sharing!