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for She is the One

by Jashley13

schedule February 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Is it dead? Or are things just going slow at the moment?
person Michael
schedule February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Is chapter 48 coming out anytime soon? No rush, just been a couple weeks. Worried you might stop the story :(
person Starkz
schedule January 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
After a year, and 47 chapters, I really have no more praise left to give.
This is perfect, simply perfect.
person Les
schedule January 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! figured somewhere in here someone from the GANG would wind up in the Prosti thing. Still think that multi colored hair girl from Gamestop( sorry bad with names ) had something to do with it. Anyway, great that you are back with the writing. You did an fantastic job again, keep them coming.
person dadbrough
schedule January 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Just wondered when chapter 47 was going to be posted, anxiously awaiting it, lol
person Les
schedule January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Once again it was great, just keeps getting better the longer you go. But like all good things it has to end sometime, unless you write ths as a series, Keep the chapters coming, they are great
person Les
schedule December 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great! Just wish Jack and Kayla could have alittle less stress with their relationship, but the way you have it built up, I can see something happening with or to Rhona where Jack has to play hero, , and I am still waiting on Gamestop to send him as a representative to some of their convention stuff. And did Kayla start taking her pills again? Keep the story coming, can hardly wait for the next chapter
person rescue25
schedule December 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT time !! Why isn't she on the pill? Thought that happened way back in the story. What did I miss??

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person Les
schedule December 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, can identify with the high school angst. Still remember a LOT of it, though its been 40 years since then. Even remember when...another story to share some time. And you really left us hanging once again...with Jack and Kayla. PLEAZSE < Please , Please...hurry with the next installment, but don't hurry and exchange a great story for speed. Very well done
person Jasmen
schedule December 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was not expecting that at all! (Spoiler alert) I hope kayla doesnt end up preggo. Or if she does it wont hurt their relationship. Once again Jashley you are amazing. Please hurry with the next chapter soon!