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for She is the One

by Jashley13

person Les
schedule May 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Whew....well worth the wait. Gotta feel sorry for Jack, but he did bring it all on himself, he should have sought help from his local LEO's and / or the school security p[eople. Please hurr y with the next installment. Can hardly wait.
person Minxxy7979
schedule May 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that your gonna continue with this story :( i'am a huuuge fan.
person Minxxycat90
schedule May 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Pls post another soon😬
person asmp1234
schedule April 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever hated anyone more than Jack in this chapter. Can you make the story about Kayla now please, at least she's a decent human being?
person Minxxycat90
schedule April 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this sooo much!! Hope you add another soon :(
person dudeydude123
schedule March 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story, I really hope you're going to deal with Jack's general cluelessness and NiceGuy attitude soon, the last half of 49 was just infuriating due to his complete idiocy. Not a criticism, it's good that you've made me care enough about the story to make me actually angry about his actions. Hopefully Rhona's rant will make him wake up and realise how stupid he can be. Keep up the good work! (P.S. Not gonna lie, I've been looking forward to another anal session with Kayla...)
person Les
schedule March 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Once again well written and good story flow, just hate that you are turning Jack into one of THOSE guys, you know the ones who think they are doing good, but cant see the train wreck at the end of the tunnel because of their do -good blinders. Take it from someone who has been there, tried to help and totally , utterly failed, and wrecked friendships and family in the process. The story though is really good and realistic in many aspects. Keep it coming, and don't wait so long next time, lol ( I know real life takes precedence, its cool).
person J
schedule March 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Jack pisses me off beyond belief. I can't believe how stupid he is but the fact that you can bring out this emotion is a sign of your skill. Keep up the work and I hope I don't pull out my hair one day because of him.
person Minkx92
schedule March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So obsessed with this!!! Cant wait for more
person Les
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Well tried this once and forgot the Captcha. Your fans are all worried you may have fallen off the face of the earth. Any news for us? we are all drooling on our keyboards and touchscreens, waiting for the next installment. Please, Let us know something. Thanks.