Hey
When are you planning to post next chapter please
freaking awesome, was wondering when he would make an appearance again. Probably was released because he was tried as a juvenile( under 18 ) and released on his 18th birthday. Also sounds like one of our main characters is suffering from a little bit of PTSD, yes it cna happen to people who DON't serve in the military too. Beat of the story was a little slower but still was very well written. Keep those chapters coming, can hardly wait for the next one
aWESOME WORK AGAIN, HOPE NEXT CHAPTER IS JUST AS GOOD AS ALL THE PREVIOUS ONES. yOUAREA GREAT WRITER, JUST WISH THERE WASA A WAY TO GETY YOU PUBLISHED
WHEW!! Finally, hope your military training went well. Yes, the long awaited next chapter was well worth the wait, and finally Jack got rid of his case of BLUE BALLS! Well written, and yes it sounds like a story so many of us guys have lived ( except for the ex-coach blowing his brains out in front of us). Keep up the awesome writing, and dont ever lose your imagination. Can hardly wait for the next chapter
Woohoo, you're back! Hope boot camp went great. :)
Rhona remains my favourite character. :D Naturally, I loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
We've been looking for chapter 59. Your story is so interesting that we are looking for the the beginning of each chapter. It seems as though we get to know Jack and Kayla quite well, so the next chapter is something we always look forward to.
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Love your story man. Will chapter 59 be up soon?
Jashley, just wondered when next xhapter will be out, lol. Sitting on the edge of my seat waiting, and my backside is getting sore. LOL. Keep up the good work.
More plss!! Its been awhile :(
Hey everyone! This is Jashley13 and I just wanted to let you all know, in case you came to ask when the next chapter is coming out, that I will be at boot camp for the next two months so I will not be able to post a new chapter until sometime around mid-November. Check the forum on my topic if you want to see updates on when I get back.
Hope you all have a great couple of months and when I get back, there will be plenty more to follow :)