Sometimes the answer is under the surface and none is in a position to find out it. Probably jack dreamed to have sex with...heather, and now, please, DON'T RUIN ALL like you did with tara! (she is a terrible character your worst creation) . Now jack must focalize on kayla, it's his girlfriend, damn it! and put an anal scene c'mon.
I do wish see the relationship between jack and kayla really visceral. Especially for kayla
It's time that jack stop to be an asshole overthinker. It's time to explore more their relationship. It's time to anal.
Quite awesome the way you semi worked them back together. And the story is just getting better and better. Keep up the great work. Andf have a great 4th of July.......that is if you celebrate it at all. Keep those chapters coming.
Smart man Jack......just remember with Amanda in the house, you do have to sleep sometime. Jack also doesnt really see what he did?? Keeping secrets from Kayla, and then not even checking on her when she was sick. Add to that, that she had almost straight out told him not to fight Brad ( she may ahve asked himas well) and he cant see a problem with that? Anyway keep up the great work. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Awesome, Jack finally starting to realize it isnt all about him. I hope when they maske up Kayla kicks his butt, for being a giant assed BUTTHEAD! There I said it, lol, hope it doesnt get my review removed or anything. Great story, but am kinda lost as to where it is going now...hopefully whereever it winds up, that it is as good as the rest of the chapters. Keep up the great story line!
OMG! Forgot to review the story last chapter, but keep em coming. Jessica is a BONAFIDE ACTRESS.... cant anyone see she is playing em both to get them to fight again. She wants them both hurt or in jail. As for Ted.... he need to put his big boy pants on, grow a pair, and go to the cops with what he knows, and take Jack with him, so Jack doesnt try to kill him. Awesome story so far Keep those chapters coming.
Thought i would never get logged in, but............FINALLY!!! This seemed like the old you writing this story. It was jsut awesome, and I am so glad for Jack to realize his parents are really looking out for him. Anyway, Keep up the great work, this story is so awesome....god am 60 yrs old, and useing the word awesome to describe something, does that really date how old I am? LOL, keep the great chapters coming.
Once again a well written story line, had a couple of typos that slipped by but over all well done. The internal Jack diatribe is a little monotonous, but i know, it sets the tale for whats to come. If many folks had that many problems they self analyzed, by this time the men with the little white coat would ahave shown up to haul em away, lol. Keep up the good work
Jack needs to learn self awareness......be aware of when he is over logicing or rationalizing something and let someone help him before he lose Kayla and the rtest of his friends. great story keep it up. Just hope everything works out well for Jack.