rate_review Reviews

I can't wait for the next chapter! You are such a great writer Jashley I hope you keep writing! You have thousands of fans that love your work, don't let any naysayers tell you differently!

This story has been phenomenal since chapter 1 glad to see you find a new home for it after the bs you were put threw on the old site

Are the stories still going to come out on Sundays

Great story as always. Went through hell trying to find it but I'm glad I did

wow what a chapter a brilliant read please please don't stop writing this many thanks

Glad you're back man. Been here since near the beginning. This chapter gave me chills. You're an amazing writer, no matter what anyone tells you. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, this one was probably the best yet. See you in the next chapter Jashley.

Just a heads up jashley13, someone reposted chap 19 on xnxx crediting you as author. Wanted you to know so hopefully you can keep family safe.

Love the story man. I'm glad you were able to find a way to continue on with what you love. Can not wait for the next chapters

Hey glad you get to keep writing. People can be suck idiots

It's probably a good thing that you've moved moved here and away from xnxx, I expect the attacks will continue, although hopefully not as bad and threatening as they have become. Onto the series, this is one of the greatest amature stories on the internet and the way it's going I'll keep on reading as long as you keep on writing. The only down point I have is having to end every single chapter on a cliffhanger. Every once in a while is fine, but with using this chapter as an example, ending it just as he is leaving for a run would be more than fine, then jumping into the action at the start of next chapter. Just one suggestion that could improve aln already exceptional story