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October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Jashley, you are a great writer. You should write a book someday. I know this should be the millionth time you're hearing this. And one more request, could you keep up with the reality check thing that you had been doing in the previous site?
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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Jashley13,
If you could understand how much your stories bring me out of the depression and anxiety I feel when it comes to relationships, being social in general, and honestly being a stand up guy, you would be in shock.
About an hour ago, I was having a huge anxiety attack after one of my closest family members and me had a fight over something so stupid and pitiful, and I was on the verge of giving up. I've been suicidal for a very long time, and it only gets worse with anxiety attacks. I was sobbing on the floor, wondering if my life could get any worse, and for some odd reason I remembered Jack. What would Jack do? That reminded me that you actually had another chapter for me to read, and i was estastic, so for the past 20 minutes, i've been reading chapter 19 with snot still hanging out of my nose, completely entranced in the idea of Kayla and Jack and Tara, and how everything was going to play out.
While this may seem weird, and this may seem overdone, but without Being More Social, and She Is The One, I would have lost it. These stories continue to give me hope that even though i'm a painfully socially awkward gentlemen who isn't the best looking, I can still someday grasp what others have, and it a significant other that loves you as much as you love them. That is what I get from She Is The one. What I get from Being More Social is the fact that even though Adam was bullied in middle school? He worked his ass off, and with the help of a few people, he was able to grab onto something more than sitting in his room, wondering what he did to deserve the mistreatement of others.
More into a personal story - Ever since I moved from a town of 1200 people to a city of about 300,00 - I've been painfully alone. I've had no friends, no family support, and my life has slowly been crumbling away. I have a job, but thats it. Its a dead end job where people don't even like me because I know what i'm doing, and nobody likes to be shown up, anyways back to the main point - Ever since I started reading these stories, it gave me a reason to get up and try to grasp more of life - I am a huge anime fan and gamer - It is my only solace from the pain and struggles I have endured growing up (Single parent family with disabled mother) and I felt that it was a good idea to try going to a convention in my city. For the first time in my life (With liquid courage of course) I was able to talk to people, get to know them, and be more social. A lot of my confidence and my will to push through these hard times was because of these two stories. Anyone who doesn't believe me, I can gladly go into more a in depth story and my exact feelings.
Needless to say; tl;dr - This story and another story in which the author has been working on, have been the reason why I don't want to give up on life. They are the reason why I feel like I have more to live for, and for that. I thank-you from the bottom of my heart.
Never stop writing, because you are my daily inspiration. Everyday I check to see if you or BashfulScribe have posted more stories - And I read them over and over again.
Thank-you.
If you could understand how much your stories bring me out of the depression and anxiety I feel when it comes to relationships, being social in general, and honestly being a stand up guy, you would be in shock.
About an hour ago, I was having a huge anxiety attack after one of my closest family members and me had a fight over something so stupid and pitiful, and I was on the verge of giving up. I've been suicidal for a very long time, and it only gets worse with anxiety attacks. I was sobbing on the floor, wondering if my life could get any worse, and for some odd reason I remembered Jack. What would Jack do? That reminded me that you actually had another chapter for me to read, and i was estastic, so for the past 20 minutes, i've been reading chapter 19 with snot still hanging out of my nose, completely entranced in the idea of Kayla and Jack and Tara, and how everything was going to play out.
While this may seem weird, and this may seem overdone, but without Being More Social, and She Is The One, I would have lost it. These stories continue to give me hope that even though i'm a painfully socially awkward gentlemen who isn't the best looking, I can still someday grasp what others have, and it a significant other that loves you as much as you love them. That is what I get from She Is The one. What I get from Being More Social is the fact that even though Adam was bullied in middle school? He worked his ass off, and with the help of a few people, he was able to grab onto something more than sitting in his room, wondering what he did to deserve the mistreatement of others.
More into a personal story - Ever since I moved from a town of 1200 people to a city of about 300,00 - I've been painfully alone. I've had no friends, no family support, and my life has slowly been crumbling away. I have a job, but thats it. Its a dead end job where people don't even like me because I know what i'm doing, and nobody likes to be shown up, anyways back to the main point - Ever since I started reading these stories, it gave me a reason to get up and try to grasp more of life - I am a huge anime fan and gamer - It is my only solace from the pain and struggles I have endured growing up (Single parent family with disabled mother) and I felt that it was a good idea to try going to a convention in my city. For the first time in my life (With liquid courage of course) I was able to talk to people, get to know them, and be more social. A lot of my confidence and my will to push through these hard times was because of these two stories. Anyone who doesn't believe me, I can gladly go into more a in depth story and my exact feelings.
Needless to say; tl;dr - This story and another story in which the author has been working on, have been the reason why I don't want to give up on life. They are the reason why I feel like I have more to live for, and for that. I thank-you from the bottom of my heart.
Never stop writing, because you are my daily inspiration. Everyday I check to see if you or BashfulScribe have posted more stories - And I read them over and over again.
Thank-you.
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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was no happy when i saw the post directing us to this site, I have been waiting for "Chapter 19". and WOW, the ending line, the beginning paragraph, well done, you went somewhere else with this one. Hope wait for Chapter 20 is not too long,
Peter
Peter
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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omggg this chapter was so gooooood i've been keeping up on the series since the first chapter was published and the story is just AMAZING . I really do wish the best for Jack and Kayla and omg noooo the ending had me like 😲😲😲😲😲 O.M.F.G. But seriously dude , keep up the great work and i know at some point it'll have to , but i hope this series never ends . ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Im a fan from the other site, so I was worried you wouldn't be making these anymore. Glad you found a solution.:)
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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
is there any idea how long this could possibly go for? as in which chapter will be the final?
i seriously love this story so much. i checked xnxx every day waiting for the next piece. i cannot even comprehend why someone would get so aggressive over a story.
as many people have said before this should be published after completion and i would be one of the first to order it. with minor changes to characters ages for legal reasons i could even see this being made into a movie or TV series, but i would fear that in changing its media it would focus more on the sex and less on the story. please keep it up and dont let anything stop you from writing this.
i seriously love this story so much. i checked xnxx every day waiting for the next piece. i cannot even comprehend why someone would get so aggressive over a story.
as many people have said before this should be published after completion and i would be one of the first to order it. with minor changes to characters ages for legal reasons i could even see this being made into a movie or TV series, but i would fear that in changing its media it would focus more on the sex and less on the story. please keep it up and dont let anything stop you from writing this.
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October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great series. Glad you found a new home. Can't wait to see what happens to Jack and Kayla. At this point, with Kayla and now Walburn, I could see Jack having a mental breakdown. Please post next chapter soon and thank you for the entertainment you so graciously provide.
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October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So glad you have decided to move to different site and keep writing. This is by far my favorite story out of everything I have read. Keep up the amazing work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that is just mean and very clever of coarse leaving us on the edge of our seats with two parts going on, brilliant chapter though cant wait for the next please deliver soon
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October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one who spent ten minutes giving every chapter a rating? Yeah? ok...Welp, time well spent. Your story is amazing and I'll continue reading it 'till the very end. I think this fresh start was a great thing, not the threats and whatnot, but...well, you know what I mean. I'm sorry it got so dangerously real, some people just don't know what to do with their lives. But you have us! Your loyal fans, and by the looks of it, you've got a LOT. Good luck, man, and I hope everything turns out well!