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Hi, I used to read your story on xnxx, and I loved it since the first paragraph. If you do read this, you can respond if you wish, but do not have to. I would love to get a response but it isn't what I'm writing for. I read this story, not for the sex, but for the story. It's real and heartfelt. A true love story. The one I want. Alas me and the love of my life are 100 miles apart. And this helps remind me why I love her. And every day, I make myself more and more into Jack Harrison. I aspire to be a writer one day and this is one of the many reasons why. I love this story. For the next chapter, I would like to see Tara and Kayla and Jack all be together. Again, not for the sex, but rather for the love. The emotions that they shall dad over within each other and themselves. The stories and the lives that will intertwine because of this action. So please let the three be happy together. That will complete my wish. Thank you for this story. Thank you for bringing the hope of being with my love one day. Thank you, for everything you've done to help, although you may not know you have.

-Anotak

I have to say first of all that I really enjoy your story. I had a question about chapter 20. **SPOILERS** do Kayla and Tara want a threesome with Jack, where they all have sex together? or that just Tara and Jack will have sex together, while Kayla isn't involved, that she is either watching or not.

Hey Man! Outstanding story cannot wait till the next. Dont worry about the dumbasses on the other site, your a fantastic writer and should be proud of your work. Thank you She is the One is a great piece of work.

Dude, I ain't complaining about how sucky it is to wait for your new chaptrr to come out. 'cos I know that your stories are definitely worth the wait. Take your time dude. Make sure it is as awesome as theother chapters. I'll be checkin everyday for your update on this story. ^_^

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so far this has been a brilliant series but I cant believe that you have left us this long in the lurch hope you are ok and please please give us another couple of chapters sooon

Please post chapter 20

Man, I cannot believe how much I wish Chapter 20 was out, I don't think I've anticipated anything this much since the ( at that time) Star Wars 3 episode (now #6). Seriously, brother, you have the gift of the story-teller. Looking forward to more of your work.

hey man. I've been with you since chap 4 and been glued ever since. sucks what happened on xnxx. people can be assholes. amd i don't want to sound like a wwe fanboy but... never quit never give up.

Could you at least give us some kind of update that you are still writing.

I dont want to keep checking back if you're not going to post anything