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I support this story, i like it so much. Best writer ever.

Dude I gotta ask, we're u watching survivor series while writing this. In ur earlier chapters (been following u since the beginning on xnxx) I remeber some planted WWE refrences. And I think Tara out of nowhere was like sting coming at survivor series. Which u can replay for just 9.99

Holy crap! The craziness never ends with this story! Thank you for the update, seriously you never disappoint. This story is brilliantly written, and I can't wait to read more. You can't help but feel for Jack, poor guy is always getting blindsided by the craziest stuff. Excited to see what happens next!

sir! what a great chapter to return with cant wait for the next so please don't keep us waiting quite so long this time thankyou

I admit I saw the ending coming. There were a few crumbs of Kayla & Tara, and I didn't think Tara was actually in the bathtub - but after Jack and Kayla had been going at it for a while I thought that maybe I was wrong.

This could get real interesting. What will Jack decide? Kayla says she's OK with it now, but will she have regrets after it's been done and there are no take backs? Would it really satisfy Tara, as it would not be done out of romantic love, but rather out of lust or a duty. The physical part would be present, but would there be any emotional connection? And that's what Tara is really missing...

Also a great job on Jack's emotional response to his trauma. That is certainly something one could never forget.

Great to find another chapter, JAshley! Have followed this story eagerly on the old site - and posted support when that idiot was trying to intimidate you. Hope there was no follow up to his threats? Anyway - this long awaited chapter was very dark, but also intriguing. However, now you have left this chapter with a possible threesome lined up - PLEASE don't let sex take over the story? Whatever - it's your story....just please don't keep us waiting so long for the next chapter. Power to your creativity!

Wow that was well worth the wait, Ty Jashley you crack me up and really are a great writer. Can't wait for next Ch. And dat cliffhanger though

OMG!! I waited so long for this chapter after you left the other site. If you don't come up with the next chapter soon I will absolutely go nuts....seriously NUTS! Also if you can tell me how to contact Tara, I'll show her there is another guy like Jack out there. PLEASE.....hurry with the next chapter. Wish I could write this well and id put stuff on here, but I cant keep the sex out of stuff for too long when I know it is going to appear in the story.

Jashley! Wow! Chapter 20 was interesting. Not one of my favourites (like 19), as I believe that the getting-back-together of Jack and Kayla was too facile, but that said, you are a guy who knows how to leave stuff on a cliffhanger! OMFG! Tara! Un-fucking-believable! Can't wait (though I do know it's going to be an arduous one) for the next one.

Best,
Vigne

Well done. Interesting twist. Could have seen the sex scene coming BUT Tara I didn't. Please on't leave us dangling too long.

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