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OMG!!!! Can you keep us hanging any more thoroughly then yopu have for 21 chapters. This is great. Keep up the fantastic writing, and don't pay any attention to the may-sayers out there. They would know good fiction if it bit them in the A$$! Hope to see the next chapter soon. Keep em coming!

Yay! Thank you for the new chapter! It was simply great as always. A very emotional read, really. Such a difficult situation Jack & Kayla are in... It was frustrating to watch both sides do things wrong, but that's the beauty of this story. Some wild and unexpected things happen, but the human emotions still seem so REAL. The happiness, the rage, the passion, the confusion, the hopelessness, the love... The whole spectrum of emotions are so wonderfully portrayed in your writing. I truly enjoy your writing and hope that if you ever get published I have the privilege of buying one of your books.

As always I am looking forward to reading more!

OMG!!! finally, Chapt 21.........and it is so spot on as to how kids think, and react to situations, trying to work them out all by themselves, when they should be talking to someone, anyone, especially their parents. In this case he had Kayla. Keep up the awesome work, and don't let ANYONE run you off this site. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Wow, the writing just keeps getting better. The raw emotion of Jack had me crying by the end. We've had a long stretch of all the high points of Jack & Kayla, and it's also good drama to see them in the trying moments.

I just didn't trust Kayla, as a woman, in a three-way. It would have been one of those things that would stick in her mind. My wife has a younger sister who was quite hot back when she was a teenager, and we had our flirty moments. A nice sloppy wet kiss under the mistle-toe, and one day at dinner in our apartment when she reached her leg under the table and stroked my crotch with her toe. That was as far as it ever got. My wife asked me if I'd ever consider having sex with her sister, and I responded only if I thought that she, my wife, was absolutely fine with it. Well now, more than twenty-five years later, she threw it back at me. We now have a very flirty niece, and my wife accused me of wanting my sister's daughter because I was never able to have her sister.

Just my God you really are a great writer, while I was reading it really started to impact me emotionally. It felt Awsome and you are awesome keep up with writing this and with just writing in general.

When will chapter 21 be coming, I really enjoy the story, please let me know...

A great story, but WAY to long between instalments. It's 2 months since the last 1. Come on my friend you really can't let this series go to wreck and ruin. Please some more. ASAP?

Thank god your back to continue this story. Your killing me with the cliffhangers. Great work cant wait for the next chpt.

Great story. Followed you over from Xnxx. Keep up the excellent writing

It's obvious that Jack is going to say yes. Yeah the girls say they'll be ok if he says no. But really? They're teenagers. Being ok gets flipped to unhappy very quickly if they don't get their way. And honestly, if the only leg Jack has to stand on for saying no is that she's his cousin, then he's a total hypocrite. He fought and argued with his parents to let his brother and sister be together. The girls would totally use that against him if he said no and he'd lose all respect. Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry lol.