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March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
another brilliant chapter but finishing like that was just plain mean lol many thanks
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March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Once again a well written chapter with all sorts of twists and turns. Hurry with the next one, lol, I keep checking on a almost daily basis to see if you have added to the story. Keep up the great work.
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February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What are you doin to me man?! LOL. No. I know what's going on. Amanda is fed up with the silence too and has decided to try and fix it her way. Yeah she knows they look too much alike to have an open relationship, but she can't help how she feels. She told Jack that she wasn't sure anymore because she was trying to convince herself that it couldn't work. Now she went and got a "boyfriend" to try and make Alan jealous enough to where he'll finally snap out of it and talk to her. Granted it was the absolute wrong way to go about it, because she didn't try to talk to him either. Their parents are still full of shit. It's like they don't care that their children aren't talking to each other. They think this is better? I'm sorry but I think you have the parents a little fucked up with that. Any parent that cares enough to break up that kind of relationship would be worried that they aren't even talking to each other now. Great story though, keep it up.
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February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The "She Is The One" story is the best i have ever read and I will continue to read them as long as they are written. I appreciate you continuing for us fans despite all that happened.
I commend you for continuing to create such a masterpiece of writing.
Theres also one other thing, on xnxx i remember reading another story of yours that was taken down, I believe it was Spaceship Experiment or something along those lines. It was also a great short story and id love to be able to read it again and show others, so if you happen to read this could you please post that story on this website.
I commend you for continuing to create such a masterpiece of writing.
Theres also one other thing, on xnxx i remember reading another story of yours that was taken down, I believe it was Spaceship Experiment or something along those lines. It was also a great short story and id love to be able to read it again and show others, so if you happen to read this could you please post that story on this website.
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February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Freaking awesome as usual. Cant wait for the catfight from this new direction. What will happen with the twins? What will happen with Kayla? Will Tara finish her move to the new town and cause problems, or will she hook up with the other twin? All sorts of ways to go with this. Even have the kids catch the parents in a swingers party ( kayla's, and Jack's parents together) at the cabin at the lake. All sorts of wildly different ways to go, and you have us anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the Fan-tastic work.
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February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Jashley13's trademark cliffhanger after a really long time! :D
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February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I Google "Schlesinger's Restaurant" and I find this from 24 Jan 2015
"Nice place. Brought my husband here for his birthday dinner. Due to icy conditions the place was rather empty. My husband thoroughly enjoyed his rib eye steak..."
"Nice place. Brought my husband here for his birthday dinner. Due to icy conditions the place was rather empty. My husband thoroughly enjoyed his rib eye steak..."
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February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter! Thanks for updating, a really LONG update too :)
So much going on, and it's hard to pick a side... Sometimes parents really do know best. In hindsight is when we usually realize it though.
So much going on, and it's hard to pick a side... Sometimes parents really do know best. In hindsight is when we usually realize it though.
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February 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Though I can get some harem-y vibes off of Jack (I'm a fan of non-conventional pairings anyways XD), I love this story to bits. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Especially to Alan and Amanda. I'd love to delve more into some of the other characters heads but I know that wouldn't fit the set up and the style of writing here so we have to wait for things to be revealed...
Reader tension?
Anyways, thanks for bringing the story here! The twins are by far my favorites, probably followed by Becca. I'm a female reader by the way and I think you've hit either mindset on target and appreciate that! The motivations and actions of characters are understandable and believable. Just don't hold it against me if I don't think Kayla is the most appealing female of the cast or that her and Jack are the most intriguing couple. They all are in their own ways. I blame you though, because now I want to know more about everyone! XD
I think Alan and Belle might be the least explored though o_o
Reader tension?
Anyways, thanks for bringing the story here! The twins are by far my favorites, probably followed by Becca. I'm a female reader by the way and I think you've hit either mindset on target and appreciate that! The motivations and actions of characters are understandable and believable. Just don't hold it against me if I don't think Kayla is the most appealing female of the cast or that her and Jack are the most intriguing couple. They all are in their own ways. I blame you though, because now I want to know more about everyone! XD
I think Alan and Belle might be the least explored though o_o
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February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
“She is the One” In my humble opinion is ONE of the most interesting stories written in this type of venue.
J Ashley has a unique style, of spinning a tale, that keeps the reader enthralled in the lives of his characters and keeps us on the path that he has created, but also wondering what twists and turns await us.
I believe, that his works should be publish in a novel and it makes this reader wonder if, it might just be good enough to be cast on the screen as well.
J Ashley has a unique style, of spinning a tale, that keeps the reader enthralled in the lives of his characters and keeps us on the path that he has created, but also wondering what twists and turns await us.
I believe, that his works should be publish in a novel and it makes this reader wonder if, it might just be good enough to be cast on the screen as well.