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Hey Jashley - best thing you ever did was leave xnxx! Since you moved over here, your writing is flowing like a river - without the dams that the fucker on xnxx was giving you. I followed you here, as your writing was good and I wanted to follow this story and I'm glad I did! You take longer to post successive chapters here, but when you do, it is worth the wait - even if it takes me a couple of hours to read them :)
Amazing stuff, buddy....keep the episode coming please!

Everytime I read your new chapters, I think 'there's no way he can surprise me, I got this figured out.' And you fuckin prove me wrong. I like to think of myself as a fairly intelligent guy, and reading this story I feel like a moron, cause I sure as fuck didn't see all that coming! LOL! Just wow man. I don't even know how to dissect this chapter. I love the ups and downs. It's just awesome. I feel like I'm on the roller coaster ride with him. Keep up the good work man. And thanks for getting a new chapter up just before my birthday lol.

Gg

Jack, he thinks a lot.

NICE NICE NICE character development you've got going there!!!
I just love this. Love this.

love it another great chapter please keep them coming

Hey jashley! Love the story, easily the best I've read in a long time. Keep the good work flowing! Also. My towns local theater is doing a production of the seusical! What a coincidence.

Wow. I hadn't even thought of that. The whole time I was reading this chapter, I was thinking that Amanda was just using Sam somehow, or Sam was gay or some off the wall thing like that. But Sam is basically Jack. Wow. Mind meet Mr. Grenade. Boom. That just threw me for a freakin loop. Leading us off in right field, then bam, curve right out into left field. I love this story. Ever since the first few sentences of chapter one. I can't stop. I check daily to see if you've updated. The parents are seriously getting on my nerves though. Like seriously. They think it's ok that Alan and Amanda aren't talking to each other? At all? Alan will come around? Not on your life. And just because Amanda brings her boyfriend over to dinner they automatically expect Alan to be ok with it? Yeah, I think a snowball has a better chance in hell. If I was Jack I'd have told Amanda that I was sorry, but wasn't giving her boyfriend a chance, cause he deserves none. But then again, I'm an asshole. lol. Anyway, keep it up man. Love this story.

Woohoo! Thanks for the new chapter! Always dropping bombs at the last minute- one of many reasons I enjoy your writing so much ^_^
Definitely looking forward to reading what happens next with the twins. Can't help but agree with the idea that just getting them to be nice to each other again is the best start. With all their emotional immaturity being so wonderfully showcased, maybe they really shouldn't be together... Very interested to see where things go!

You invaluable man... you make me happy with this stories.

When is the Alan-Amanda saga gonna end?

If I am right, then it goes like Kayla-Brad,Jessica-Walburn,Tara-Siblings...

What comes next?

26 - another jashley cliff-hanger! I was starting to think Amanda was off fucking someone. Jack & Kayla only had two sex scenes in the last three chapters, covering like six weeks - it's almost as if they're married!

Anyway, love it as always.