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May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another well written chapter to the story. Has an interesting possibility goin g on there at the end withTara possibly going to the lake cabin with them. Hope it doesn't cause Jack more problems then he can handle( wink, wink). Keep up the great writing
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May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Long time between posts. Lot of background in this one. Setting up for the big week at the cabin? Taking Tara could be interesting.
Do Kala and Tara have something going OR does Kala want to see if Jack is strong enough to remain faithful with Tara in close quarters and trying to jump his bones?
Waiting for the next one.
B
Do Kala and Tara have something going OR does Kala want to see if Jack is strong enough to remain faithful with Tara in close quarters and trying to jump his bones?
Waiting for the next one.
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May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I.
Love.
This.
You've got a hardcore fan in me right now. This stuff is too good. Too good. Too good.
Why the hell don't you write a book?
Love.
This.
You've got a hardcore fan in me right now. This stuff is too good. Too good. Too good.
Why the hell don't you write a book?
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April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You know until I just read it in was going to ask what was going to happen about the whole threesome with Tara thing. But I'm thinking the way you ended this Ch. Already answered that. Your awesome can't wait till next Ch.
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April 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Tamed down quite a bit, a bit more of the teenage angst going on. but still way above the rest of the stories I read here. Keep up the great work, can hardly wait for the next chapter
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April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
MAN!!! FREAKING awesome, never saw that coming, though in hindsight , it had to be that way, can hardly wait for the next chapter. Keep up the GREAT writing............... and get that next chapter out! LOL
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April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow,just wow. I thought that I had seen and read everything you had to offer but nope I was dead wrong. Great Ch. My mind is relatively blown.
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April 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love how Jack's character is growing. Back in the fall people worried if he was too 'good'. Now we see him being self centered, making mistakes and questioning himself. Not that it makes him a bad guy, but a real person.
I was waiting for a teacher to catch Jack doing to it Kayla's butt in the staff parking lot.
I was waiting for a teacher to catch Jack doing to it Kayla's butt in the staff parking lot.
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April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh fucking god.
I fucking wanted to cry, and oh my god.
Why the hell am I feeling what Jack's feeling? I don't like this feeling...I don't want to be sad..
I fucking wanted to cry, and oh my god.
Why the hell am I feeling what Jack's feeling? I don't like this feeling...I don't want to be sad..
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April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
what a great chapter love the way you twist and turn the story if I have one complaint it would be the time we have to wait for the next chapter lol please keep the coming you are doing a great job many thanks