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Thanks, Jashley13.
You are blessed.

Well that was a surprise. Almost thought he was going to call Rhonda. Now that would have been a step just don't in what direction. How is she going to react to a shrink? Can/will he even talk to her without parent's permission?

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Awesome, went through something like this myself, didn't end well I am afraid. BUT! Once again you amaze with how true to life you can make your characters, keep the chapters coming.

Am I the only one here who thinks that Jack over thinking sex 24/7 it gets annoying when he keeps overthinking everything hasn't he ever heard the saying "it doesn't matter where you land when you jump as long as you jump" he wasn't perfect in the threesome by far and Kayla shouldn't have asked him to look at her while he was with Tara she should have just watched so really it was her own fault she's acting this way and why the threesome didn't go the way it was planned

Wow, great follow up on the last chapter, and I do mean I hope you get the next one out quick. Love this whole story line with the teenage angst, sex, and realtionships

For those complaining that "sex should be fun" the scene with Jack, Kayla and Tara reminded me of some of my own bad times. Sex should be fun, spontaneous and loving. Unfortunately, there have been times with my wife of many years that I've found myself over thinking it, trying too hard to put on a good performance, to satisfy her, that I'm thinking "I hope I don't do anything wrong" while I'm in the act - and that doesn't do anything to stimulate me. I've also had the experience of many years later being yelled at for being attracted to her sister. From early on there was something in there that poked at here.

I fell in love with this story very quickly. I soon found myself telling all my friends of the crazy world of Jack and Kayla. It's so fun and refreshing from the usual generic love stories. Jashley, reading this inspired me to write my own story based on some things that have happened in my life. Thank you for writing this, and being an inspiration. Keep up the good work!

MAN!!! Just when it cant get any better you write a whopper new chapter. Keep it up This is fantastic.

While I love this story all this depression and over thinking that Jack Kayla and Tara are doing is getting really annoying sometimes like sex should be fun it's supposed to be fun it shouldn't come with all these rules and boundaries like they should just enjoy each other they are young and while Jack and Kayla love each other they need to still grow with each other and try things with other people in each other as well as long as they are both okay with it.

You kept it real.

Thanks for that.