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October 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Darn it all. It's taken me a good month to read all 40 chapters and I catch up to this cliffhanger?!?! Poor Jack can't catch a break! Oh I saw that threesome a mile away. To be that naive again -sighs- great writing and I love the fact your chapters aren't 3 paragraphs long. Can't wait to the next one!
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October 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really didn't see that coming
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October 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
For the life of me I can't understand why anyone would want to bring up anal in a chipotle
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September 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wait. Did I tell you how awesome you are?
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That was awesome. I like Binyam a lot, dunno why. I think he has a deeper side to him than quasi-flirting with Shannon.
Aaaand, I like the English teacher with the blue tooth. And everything about this story, too.
The slow change in the narrative is finally noticeable now, when you read chapter 1 right after chapter 40. Feels like Jack has grown up. The events shaped him up to be more cynical, and less of a traditional 'good guy'.
I might start shipping Joe and Sam if I didn't know how devastating it feels to be Belle. Or Amanda, for that matter.
Oh, and this should TOTALLY be a book. A much better coming of age story than most crap out there.
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That was awesome. I like Binyam a lot, dunno why. I think he has a deeper side to him than quasi-flirting with Shannon.
Aaaand, I like the English teacher with the blue tooth. And everything about this story, too.
The slow change in the narrative is finally noticeable now, when you read chapter 1 right after chapter 40. Feels like Jack has grown up. The events shaped him up to be more cynical, and less of a traditional 'good guy'.
I might start shipping Joe and Sam if I didn't know how devastating it feels to be Belle. Or Amanda, for that matter.
Oh, and this should TOTALLY be a book. A much better coming of age story than most crap out there.
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September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OK, still love this story, but this part was almost predictable ( the part where he caught them kissing). But you really need to get to what put a bug up the ass of the theater lady, nad tell us what hold Jessica has over her. Love it anyway, keep up the great story line
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September 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Master of the cliff hanger strikes again
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September 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Where the heck did all that come from.........awesome new twist, now I am waiting for the other shoe to drop. Get the next chapter out.....NOW!!! PLEASE!!
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September 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A little slower then the past chapters, but........ WOW d you have the whole teenage High scholl angst down. Sure you aren't living all of this? Please, please , please hurry with the next chapter. Can see Jack as Craig's campaign manager, and convincing ever4yone Craig has really changed. Just hurry with the next Chapter,
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August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just when I didn't think I could get more anxious for another chapter, you had to throw a teaser in like that at the end? Aweesome Chapter....NOOOOOWWWWWW HURRY U and get us the next one
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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
As a continuing reader of this great story I can truly say........OMG!!!! Thought Jack would never get back with Kayla, and I felt like him there at the end thought he would never get back in Kayla either. And has it actually been 4 weeks since the last chapter? I actually went back and started rereading the whole story again while waiting. Keep up the great work. Hope next chapter is sooner?? lol just don't rush and keep up the great work.