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for Immortality

by Melrick

schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

A creation that kills its creator.

Course, there's no garuntee that its plan will work.

Meta horror.

person Anon
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent flash fiction! Using only dialogue, you've covered setting, mood and back story without missing a beat. This is extremely well done, and I'd say you met your personal goal and then some. The prompt words blended in so seamlessly that I had to reread to find them.

Superb, as always, and thank you!

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