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for Don't Look Back

by DarkLoveZorg

person snowleopard
schedule October 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I just found your story and really like it.

I would love to learn how Marshall and Lee first met, and what happened to Marshall's father. Maybe, you could write a flashback scene or something similar to explain it. So, they live in Fargo, right? Will they move to Texas like Marshall was thinking?

I don't know how long this will be or what you have planned but can't wait to read more of it.

Thanks for sharing!

I would have left a signed-in review but I am usually to lazy too, lol.





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