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October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon this is the best thing I have read all week.
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April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so deliciously HOT........................
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April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My only complaint is that the chapters aren't longer.
CL
CL
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April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
CL - The only reason the chapters are as short as they are is because they are from flash fiction that I post on my blog. As I go, I'm putting the chapters together and will be releasing the whole thing as a free read when it's done.
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March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez, I just found this and read it all in one go. I somehow missed the Inc tag, it's there, I just over looked it but it really doesn't matter because the way you present the relationship between Marshall and Lee makes me not care. I love them together.
Your writing is really great, you convey emotion without beating me over the head with it and the smex is hot. I can't wait to read more.
CL
Your writing is really great, you convey emotion without beating me over the head with it and the smex is hot. I can't wait to read more.
CL
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March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much!!! Next chapter please!
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November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I am still here and still reading! I just haven't reviewed any stories lately because I've been sick with a bad cold that's making me feel crumby and all I want to do is curly up under the covers and sleep. I really am enjoying reading Marshall and Lee's story. Now, I am going to go make myself a cup of steaming hot tea, add honey and milk, then curl up and take another nap. This cold is burning me out and I don't have much energy lately.
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November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I always smile when I see a new update! Keep up the great writing! =)
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October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! What a sizzling hot new chapter! I just hope no one is watching Lee administer Marshall's punishment that would be embarrassing, lol. Thanks for updating so fast!
I used to read stories similar to this featuring heavy BDSM that were written by, 2rainsong2, an author here on AFF but she can't share them with us anymore since she became a published author. I hope you write more of these type of stories in the future too even though I know it's not every reader's cup of tea.
I hope Marshall continues to get into all sorts of trouble with his Dom because I love the punishment scenes! I am a naughty girl, lol.
I used to read stories similar to this featuring heavy BDSM that were written by, 2rainsong2, an author here on AFF but she can't share them with us anymore since she became a published author. I hope you write more of these type of stories in the future too even though I know it's not every reader's cup of tea.
I hope Marshall continues to get into all sorts of trouble with his Dom because I love the punishment scenes! I am a naughty girl, lol.
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October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story as well and saw there were a lot of views but only one review so I figured I would stop being lazy and let you know it is much appreciated. I think I know the relationship between Marshall and Lee now that you have shared the bit about Marshall being an only child and the love he had for his father. I don't want to spoil it for anyone else who perhaps hasn't reached the same conclusions I have so I will leave it at that. Your style is really good and you give just enough to keep the reader engaged and with hold enough to allow us to apply our mental faculties.