rate_review Reviews

I'm sad you never finished sucks being late to the party

0.0 ... Yes! It has been so long since I last read this, so very happy that I found this again! Going to bookmark this one for sure. I am really looking forward to where this is going.

You are doing great for your first story. Keep after it and you'll keep improving. It's rough around the edges, but that's easily fixed with someone to help you edit. Reading a lot will help you too. Thanks for sharing your story. Xoxo Robin

I really love your story. Please update soon :)

I wasn't sure I'd like it but I was strangely intrigued, I'm a sucker for unusual plots and characters so i really like this one, Crow is an interesting character you really feel for him and everything he's been through I feel like he just needs a loving hug :). I was worried when I go to the "sexual" parts because the adult stories I've read are just gross and written just to be well for shock value and nothing else backing it but that. This story did it correct you have good balance it's not just focused on the physical aspects of sex/rape but also the emotions that come along with it so it's more tolerable for the reader to be disturbed but to also invest in the character. Really nice story!

I really like the pacing you have, the variety between action and developmental scenes where we get to know more about Crow's backstory and the characters around him, all whilst general events keep moving. Thumbs up! ;D

This here reader is intrigued! Looking forward to seeing what's up next. Hopefully Crow gets some TLC!

I really love this story! I like how it has me on an emotional roller-coaster...the humor is subtle and well placed too. The writing technique you use is amazing. The way you explain things...I can picture everything in my head perfectly. Im excited to see where you take us with this so keep up the updates and thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

AW!!! This chap was sweet!!!!! Poor crow needed a good snuggle w sum1 he cared 4!!! Now i wanna c who crow begins 2 feel mor 4, "Daddy", or the lawman! I hope u update soon cuz im gettin hookt!!!

Rukia

O good i couldn't review b4 this chap!!! I luv this story so far, i hope colbys serius mood swings/split personality(???) is explained, & poor crow stays off his sh*t list!!! Plz update soon!!!

Rukia