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Good chapter.

O ouch the 'ID' sounds painful. I hope it's just that the keepers a bit sadistic & the lord had expected him 2 b warned, but i also understand that n such a reality, it would b necessary 4 any1 unaccustomed 2 slavery 2 quickly hav ther new status made obvious 2 them. I just hope it's not 2 harsh 4 him n the long run. I most enjoy master slave stories were a relationship is established 2 make the slave obedient mor from luv or respect than fear or sexual motivation. That bein sed i look 4ward 2 seein werever u decide 2 take this story. Plz update soon, i enjoy the direct flow of ur style

Rukia

I enjoyed learning more about Connor and what happened to him before he was modified and sold at auction to Lord Sensir. Hey, and it is his fault he's in this predicament for stabbing that kid. Ouch! Poor Connor! I do like the idea of this tracking/identification necklace because I think it will help protect Connor too.

I still have a feeling Connor will get himself into trouble before too long and I don't think I want to see Rider in a bad mood. He's being pretty nice to Connor so I hope Connor doesn't blow it by doing something stupid.

I was just getting ready to go to bed and saw you posted another chapter! You have spoiled me with the fast updates but I will be patient for you to write more of them.

Yeah, Connor and Lord Sensir have officially met each other.

I hope Lord Sensir allows Connor to paint a portrait of him without his clothes, lol.

Poor Connor, Rider showed him his dark side but at least now he knows to show him more respect.

I liked learning Connor volunteered for the program to get out of prison but wonder if he knew what would happen. Oh, well, it's too late now to change his mind and I have a feeling he will eventually like his new life.

I'm really enjoying this, I can't wait to see how all of the characters develop, how Rider came to be in Lord Sensir's household, what made Connor think it was ok to stab someone, and if Lord Sensir is all kind and patient, or if he has his own temper.

O goodie!!!!! I was so happy wen i read ur statement, & even mor so wen i got dun w the chapter!!! I rate it 10 out of 10, & the overall story so far, a 9 out of 10(i withhold 1 out of fear it will take a sad turn, as i HATE tragedies(seriously should make that a warning tag on this site!!!)). I hope the pov of the lord will b shown mor, so hes mor relatable. As 4 the artist turned slave, i hope he can find a way 2 connect w sum1 2 ease his stormy mind. I also hope mor of caretaker is revealed so that i may judge wether i like or curse him, lol. Plz update soon!!!

Rukia

Short note: just lookt over the other newer reviews, & saw snowleopards nude portrait comment: i LOVE that idea!!! If u don't make that a part of the plot, i beg u 2 add it 2 the end as a "this ddnt happen but im indulging my fans' clip. ???:-)???

Rukia

Hi, I am intrigued by the first chapter and can't wait until Connor wakes up and meets his new master.

I feel the start of something worth following....

Cool. So far the lord seems unique, unlike a lot of master types n these sorts of stories. I hate how many r simply an a$$hole master that brakes a slaves spirit simply 2 feel powerful or dominant. I also hope that this has a happier endin than they usually do. Is connors talent goin 2 play a key role n the plot??? I hope so as so much emphasis was put on it. I also hope the lord gives him bak a lil of wat he's lost(appearance, personal objects, Etc). Most other master/slave stories focus on the nearly complete destruction of the helpless slave. Plz update soon.

Rukia