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for Black Glass: Opacity

by TakahashiAlice

person Rukia Isaioi
schedule October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oooh i like, i LIKE!!! Plz update soon. I wanna see connor get creativ w wat he's bin told!!!

Rukia
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule October 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
O u so mean. Teaser!!! ;) plz update soon!!!
person Roya7
schedule October 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! What a tease!!! You are cruel.... After all this time ... lol :P

I can't wait to read more of this story of yours ^_^ It's addictive :3

Please update sooooonnnn ;)
person Melara
schedule October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was so super happy to see that a new chapter had appeared tonight!! I was feeling like it would be silly to check since the other chapters had been posted a little while ago, but im glad i checked!!

Its nice to get some insight on this new world he lives in, and how hes not so alone in this whole 'pet or slave' ideal. Usually the slaves in most stories are kept inside and imprisoned. So its a nice breath of fresh air to read about basically a entire shopping district just for them!

I cant wait till the master gets home! Super excited for the next chapter. Great work!
person J
schedule October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this is off to a really great start!! :) definitely has me interested. please update soon!
person Melara
schedule October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Agh! I love this!!!

I sadly didn't get to be drawn in from the updates, i instead was able to read all 4 chapters in one sitting! It was like eating a bag of chips! I couldn't stop! But now ive run out of chips and i have to wait for a update? THE HORROR. I absolutely love the world you have given us. It feels insanely advanced yet somehow keeps the feel of being normal time. Connor seems like a adorable guy, adorable might not be the correct word for him, as he does seem to be a 'almost' murder, along with having a sharp tongue and a boiling temper. In fact, he might punch me for typing such a thing! None of the less, i adore his character, and his Master makes us all swoon, at least i know i am! He has a intense control of the situation and seems utterly calm and collected. The world could be exploding and i imagine him casually walking away holding the remote that set all those bombs off not worried at all.

I CANNOT WAIT for the next installment! You just picked yourself up and fan!
person snowleopard
schedule October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh, I wasn't expecting another update this quick!!!! Awesome!!!!!!!!

I hope Connor doesn't get one of those tattoos because I bet he would get in trouble for it. I wonder if he will be late getting back to Lord Sensir and what would happen if he was.

I like Ella and she is very interesting.

I am seriously worried now what they do with the slaves that they get tired of just by what she said. That's that.

Night and thanks for the new update!

person rukia isaioi
schedule October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Cool!!! I enjoyd the info this chap supplies, hope sensir doesn't do an about face n personality. I can really c connor & him connectin w him showin just the rite amount of tolerance and patience. I do hav a question i hope ull adress: is slavery a permanent occupation n this reality(i can c it as a factor of ther relationship most slave stories skip over)??? Sum stories make that dificult 2 figure out, while others make it 2 confusing. Im really enjoyin this story & were its goin so far. Lookin 4ward 2 nxt chapter!!!

Rukia
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning! About time we got another quality slave fic on here. Can't wait to read more! :D
person Celestialuna
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good start of story!!