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Aww! Poor baby!!! (I mean Iggy)

I really enjoyed this first chapter! Iggy is awesome! I hope you update soon! =)

Good start of story, I totally like!!

please update soon

gaaaah I want to like Iggy but he's such a pushover. There's a point when too many kids are too many kids, and he should just let them go into the system, or push the children on the relatives of the mother. That dad also needs to be neutered! Frankly Iggy's situation is so ridiculous it's a little hard to believe. Iggy needs some problems of his own (like, maybe he is an alcoholic, or uses weed from time to time, or he's a chain smoker). No one can be that nice or sane without having their own form of cheap coping mechanisms (since he's too poor to afford therapy).

PLEASE don't stop writing!! I've fallen in love with Iggy, such a sweet character

Interesting start. One editing question... Are Danny and Tony two different people? You spent a lot of time introducing Danny and then Tony is just thrown in the mix. It almost seems if Danny and Tony become interchangeable in there interaction with Iggy.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Great start can't wait to see show this all pans out. Hope Iggie gets some help, or he just might pass out.

Wow!!! This chapter had me bouncin on the walls!!! I can't wait 2 c were it goes, fervently prayin it's gonna hav a happier ending than beginnin. Also could u add a small chart sumwer that lists the ages, types(A,B or O) & mothers of all the kids u described??? Its pretty confusin altogether. Also i hope ther is a description of the familys home. Finally, somethin a lot of authors who rite these types of stories leave out is: wat r the ratios n population toward the types??? Holding my breath for the next update, plz continue this awesum story!!!

Rukia

I just read the other peoples reviews & saw 1 person said iggy needed his own vice 2 b believable, butPLEASE DON'T do sumthin like make him a drug addict/alcoholic!!!!! As it is, the people bein split from dominant 2 submissive makes iggys personality mor real than it would b n a world like ours . So plz ignor that suggestion!!!