rate_review Reviews

I hope you have the time to put out another chapter~!

You MUST update again! Right now! I can't wait to read more if this story!

This is an interesting story; please keep it up. And writer's block can be a real challenge. I would recommend a spell check first, though.

Oh coolness, an update!!! Aw I hope the baby ain't sick!!! And hello! Mafia spin: sugar daddy turns lover twist later perhaps??? :-) plz update soon as the suspence is killing me. I hope I don't hav 2 wait as long 4 the next 1
Rukia

I like it so far. Iggy is an interesting character and the kids seem to each have their own personalities too. I'm not sure about the alpha, beta, omega thing, it confuses me but that's just me because it's not something I read a lot.

There are a few typos and missed words but nothing that makes it totally unreadable.

One suggestion I have is write it and then leave it for a bit before you read it again, it usually helps me to find my errors. When you're typing it and it's still fresh in your mind how you wanted it to read, it's easier to just see what you want instead of what's actually there.

Waiting for the next chapter...

CL

This is pretty cool so far.just wondering one thing : Is iggy's father getting neutered? Poor Iggy.

I like it. Can't wait to read more.

I am really happy you are going to continue this story! If you need a beta email me and I will edit for you.

Totally love the A/B/O dynamic but please tell me they're not shifters.

yay!