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Oh my god this story is really amazing!!!! I'm kind of sad I only found it now^^ I really like the way you discribe the change going on in daynes behavior^^ And I really like our freak with no fashion sense^^ I really can't wait to see how else dayne will change!!! Mabe you can give us a describtion of him the next time I'd like to know how he looks except his amber eyes and scars? See you again soon!!!

Helllo~
Im currently reading your story...
-gigglesnort-
You told me to.
I plan on writing something, so when i do ill hit you up~
~SlyBlueRen Out~

Another great chapter!
I was a bit worried when Dayne went with Dust but he was thinking of Onion the whole time.....so I didn't really need to panic! =)
It will be interesting to see who makes the first move.....Dayne or Onion. Standoffish Dayne is already falling for adorable Onion.....he just doesn't know it yet. =P
Can't wait for the next update! ^^

I really enjoyed this second chapter. Onion is absolutely hysterical & what a fun name he has! =D He will be a great influence on Dayne....help him loosen up a bit! =)
Hope you update again soon!

Great start, can't wait to see what happens next! ^^ Looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon! =)

I like what I read so far. It seems interesting. Definitely gonna read this! Looking forward for the next chapter. :)

I liked it. Please continue this !!!