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May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I couldn't review for a while but my work got in the way!!!! Now with all teh upcomming holidays in germany it's dieing down a bit so I have more time for reading!!!! Daynes friends a really behaving quit wired in the last two chapters.... I'm kind of getting a bad feeling concerning Onion... I hope he does not have some kind if sinister plot to hurt Dayne.... Anyway great chapters^^ Hope to see you again soon!!!!
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January 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Onion is cute, although a bit strange. I can't wait to find out how they knew each other, and all the other little secrets running around.
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December 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here and still reading your story! Glad you haven't abandoned this story. Hope your exams went well. =)
Thanks for posting 2 new chapters. I really liked both. The end of chapter 8 was astonishing. I was like 'what on earth is going on with Onion??!!' haha. Thankfully, you posted chapter 9 and I was able to get some answers. Dayne's past is very sad but it also explains his trust issues and it was nice to get a glimpse into his past. I hope you will write even more about his past, as well as Onion's.
Can't wait for the next update. Please update soon! =)
Thanks for posting 2 new chapters. I really liked both. The end of chapter 8 was astonishing. I was like 'what on earth is going on with Onion??!!' haha. Thankfully, you posted chapter 9 and I was able to get some answers. Dayne's past is very sad but it also explains his trust issues and it was nice to get a glimpse into his past. I hope you will write even more about his past, as well as Onion's.
Can't wait for the next update. Please update soon! =)
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November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting 2 chapters this evening! Awesome surprise and I really LOVED both chapters! =)
I love how Dayne & Onion's relationship is evolving. So sweet! Onion brings out the best in Dayne. I obviously can't wait for things to get real kinky between them but in the meantime, it's nice to see how they interact with each other in public & with their new friends. I hope Dayne behaves himself at the party!
Please update again soon! =)
I love how Dayne & Onion's relationship is evolving. So sweet! Onion brings out the best in Dayne. I obviously can't wait for things to get real kinky between them but in the meantime, it's nice to see how they interact with each other in public & with their new friends. I hope Dayne behaves himself at the party!
Please update again soon! =)
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November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The run was great!!!! I liked a lot that they are soulmates!!!! I wonder what happend to danye to make him think so negativly hope he maybe will tell onion when he is drunk or something!!!! Can't wait for more, thank you so much for the double update!!!!
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October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Again that was amazing!!! Can't wait for the run^^ see you again soon!!!!
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October 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter put a huge smile on my face! I love how sweet & playful Dayne was with Onion! =)
I was sad & worried after reading the last chapter. For some reason, I started thinking that Dayne might become romantically involved with one of his new friends (which hadn't been my initial impression when I read the beginning of this story) but I'm glad I was right the first time around and Dayne will be with Onion. Yay!
Please update again soon! ^^
I was sad & worried after reading the last chapter. For some reason, I started thinking that Dayne might become romantically involved with one of his new friends (which hadn't been my initial impression when I read the beginning of this story) but I'm glad I was right the first time around and Dayne will be with Onion. Yay!
Please update again soon! ^^
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October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGAWD. "DO YOU DO SQUATS"
I love that so much
I love that so much
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October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating so quickly and thank you for the longer chapter! I really enjoyed it!
I wish I had someone like Onion in my life. He's just soooo adorable!! =)
Was it just me or did Dayne seem a little bit 'cold/distant' towards Onion in this chapter? He seemed quite pre-occupied with his new friends and Onion was a bit more upset in this chapter. Dayne didn't even bother to chit chat with Onion before heading to bed. And the part about Onion watching Dayne sleep & Dayne not noticing Onion as he headed out of the room......*cries*. Poor Onion! =(
Not sure how the new friends fit in yet. So far, they seem to be a good influence on Dayne but who knows if that will still be the case later on. I'll just have to wait & see!
Can't wait for the next update! =)
I wish I had someone like Onion in my life. He's just soooo adorable!! =)
Was it just me or did Dayne seem a little bit 'cold/distant' towards Onion in this chapter? He seemed quite pre-occupied with his new friends and Onion was a bit more upset in this chapter. Dayne didn't even bother to chit chat with Onion before heading to bed. And the part about Onion watching Dayne sleep & Dayne not noticing Onion as he headed out of the room......*cries*. Poor Onion! =(
Not sure how the new friends fit in yet. So far, they seem to be a good influence on Dayne but who knows if that will still be the case later on. I'll just have to wait & see!
Can't wait for the next update! =)
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October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was totally amazing!!! I wonder why the four just out of the blue insist to be his friends. I hope nothing bad will come from that. Can't ait for them to go running together. And I wonder what onion is^^ thanks fortune really long chapter and hope to hear from you again soon!!!!!