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oh dear gods this story is amazing!

I agree with, Anon. Now that I think about it I thought I had a glimpse of forshadowing. Which made me
Suspect that, Claire might be pregnant. If you do have a sequal running through your head, you should definelty post it!!! :) :) :) I know others and myself would be thrilled!!! :)

Aw, I'm gonna hope for a sequal..
I'm even gonna give you some suggestions like I like to do!

Him showing up months or a year or two later.
Or she could be called away into the field, to another country for work per chance. And somehow they meet.
Or she could get fired and decide to go dark.

But one big question, despite all her preventative measures is she pregnant?

Noooooo!!!! This can't be over!!!!!!! I need more!!! Lol!

Well, Claire got his tongue! Mm, that part was hot and yummy.... Then the violation, poor girl. Will she glad to have him leve her? Or will she be sad? I personally can't believe he won't come back. They have a strange sorta relationship, it's almost like he'd think she belonged to him. His possession and his alone. Imagine, him staying with her, keeping human form during the day and then fucking her senseless as often as he could without killing her. How could she go back to normal sex after having him inside her. Imagine those big long cocks pounding you and then getting his tongue, but having to go back to a plain old ordinary man..

Anyway, I'll stop with the inappropriate stuff now, but damn that story is so hot! I really hope you write more... Thanks for writing the licking whether it was my suggestion that put it in your head or not! I. Loved it!

I love this story! Its so funny and hott ofcourse...could you imagine if one of these facilities really existed? I mean...theres no telling what is being kept from us...but this would be awesome! Annnnd scary...at first! :)

Sorry, if this review is uncomfortable and inappropriate but I don't have an account. But this story is so hot, seriously, at first it kinda creeped me out. But the idea of getting 4 monster cocks.... Mmm! I am kind curious however. Does he have a tongue and if so how would Claire respond to that. His head buried between her thighs, his tongue licking at her and yeah. Filling her... Sounds yummy to me. Sorry again, that was really graphic.

I love it! tentacle stuff is my favourite and this is by far the best I've found!! keep up the good work, i look forward to reading more :)

Amazing!!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!!!!

Hahaaaa! I love it! I gotta admit...once you get past being terrified it sounds pretty fucking awesome! Cant wait for the next chapter:)